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Thinking Outloud

I'm stuck in a world where nothing seems right Cold and miserable in strength but base is a fright Do not give up on hope, we can all resist and cope With the responsibility of the well being You don't have to trust but just believe me I needed support like this to free me Now I'm in disbelief of what has occurred Look up at the sky and i see the birds Gliding not realizing the beauty of the world Beauty in disguise We see it everyday as we rise All but none applies Complies to what we are putting to waste Taken into consideration but never embraced Looked upon but evaded like a hole in a street Beauty all around confound And we act like the 8th wonder hasn't been found It's not coincidence that we exist I will not stop to persist what has not been dismissed Thinking out loud because I have vowed Aimed for the rotating population Or maybe just my inner crowd

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/17/2013 4:54:00 PM
Hi Santiago, love the flow and rhyme. I hear you out loud... just let it out... LOL, I so love the poem. thanks for dropping in and saying hi... SKAT
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Date: 7/17/2013 7:11:00 AM
Inspirational stuff Cruz.Loved it.Welcome to poetry soup.
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