Thinking Outloud

I'm stuck in a world where nothing seems right
Cold and miserable in strength but base is a fright 
Do not give up on hope, we can all resist and cope
With the responsibility of the well being 
You don't have to trust but just believe me
I needed support like this to free me 
Now I'm in disbelief of what has occurred
Look up at the sky and i see the birds
Gliding not realizing the beauty of the world
Beauty in disguise 
We see it everyday as we rise
All but none applies 
Complies to what we are putting to waste
Taken into consideration but never embraced
Looked upon but evaded like a hole in a street
Beauty all around confound
And we act like the 8th wonder hasn't been found
It's not coincidence that we exist
I will not stop to persist what has not been dismissed
Thinking out loud because I have vowed
Aimed for the rotating population 
Or maybe just my inner crowd
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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July 17, 2013 at 4:54 PM
Hi Santiago, love the flow and rhyme. I hear you out loud... just let it out... LOL, I so love the poem. thanks for dropping in and saying hi... SKAT
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July 17, 2013 at 7:11 AM
Inspirational stuff Cruz.Loved it.Welcome to poetry soup.
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