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Thinking Out Loud

Thinking out loud 

If somehow I could 
read your mind,
in every thought
I’d view

All that I would 
hope to find,
is that you
love me too

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Alexis Y.

April 7, 2017 at 9:47 AM

Hi Chris, Thinking out loud... This is a beautiful and romantic poem. I hope that you find the love and happiness that you seek. A without doubt seven:-) Alexis

Chris Green

April 7, 2017 at 10:04 AM

Thank you so very much Alexis. I am so happy you liked this one.

Charmaine Chircop

April 7, 2017 at 4:57 AM

And if somehow She could see what lies within your heart when bleeding passions breathe She'd probably'd yearn to find Herself,Nobody else, in each warmest drumming beat . :) Your sweet adorable poem is very inspiring Christopher :) Smile.

Chris Green

April 7, 2017 at 8:21 AM

Thank you so very much my sweet friend. Your beautiful comments and kindness always send good thoughts to my mind. I smile every time you visit my poetry. :)

Ilene Bauer

April 6, 2017 at 7:55 PM

this is delightful! so sweet and so well said!

Chris Green

April 7, 2017 at 8:19 AM

Thank you so very much Ilene for your kind thoughts

Freddie Robinson Jr.

April 6, 2017 at 7:39 PM

So aptly expressed, Chris. A very keen kernel of insight given to us. Ty for your thoughts/feelings. They are treasured by us. A splendid poem on so many levels. Love and joy to you, friend-o.

Chris Green

April 7, 2017 at 8:18 AM

Thanks so much Freddie. I am happy you liked this little poetic thought I had. I appreciate you my friend.

Tim Smith

April 6, 2017 at 5:45 PM

If there was an on/off switch I'd be okay but most likely she's already told you she loves you.

Chris Green

April 6, 2017 at 5:52 PM

Thanks so much Tim. Yeah but I never tire of hearing it. :)

Emile Pinet

April 6, 2017 at 5:41 PM

Your words convey emotions that are easily understandable, totally felt and poetically expressed. Emile.

Chris Green

April 6, 2017 at 5:43 PM

Thanks so much my friend. I appreciate your visits to my poetry and the kind words you leave for me.

Jan Allison

April 6, 2017 at 5:13 PM

Oh so romantic ... I think you should submit some of these little gems to Hallmark - they are a delight to read Chris:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green

April 6, 2017 at 5:23 PM

Thanks so much Jan. I guess you never know, maybe someday I will send them a few.

Lisa Ricci

April 6, 2017 at 4:48 PM

Top of The Evening to you Chris. I was just about to close the computer for the night but somehow my eye caught this entry. It is a one in a million gem. It is timeless. But most important, it is simplistically (yes simplistically) beautiful in thought and reality. Bless the two special people. Well done entirely. Have a great night. PS, I mean that with the highest regard.

Chris Green

April 6, 2017 at 4:52 PM

Thanks so very much Lisa for your ever kind comments on my poems. This little piece just came to me this afternoon and I couldn't get it out of my head so I had no choice but to jot it down. I am so happy you liked my "Greeting Card" style poem. : )

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