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Thinking of You This Father's Day

It’s a little peculiar To think You are more present Than ever More now That you are gone I feel you hovering around me Protective and encouraging I feel you Plugged into my energy Almost living vicariously Through me And it gives me Strength and determination As I feel you with me More like a spiritual presence Holding my hand Guiding me On my quest Through the galaxy Of life’s miracles and mysteries Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~A SIMPLE MAN~ 2020 AP: 2nd place 2021, Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on May 10, 2018 for contest MID MAY PREMIERE sponsored by BRIAN STRAND

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Timothy Mcguire

Date: 5/24/2018 9:34:00 PM

Beautiful. We will never know the limit of Gods mercy and who he allows to visit us after leaving the earth. There is no doubt love is too powerful to quench.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/25/2018 5:07:00 AM

Thank you so much for your lovely visit, Timothy. Most appreciated.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 5/11/2018 11:45:00 AM

Fathers leave our very world and we are never the same as before.. A whole missing a core! A wonderful tribute to your Dad! May the hand of God sooth your innermost and shower peace on your father's soul. Stay blessed dear Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/11/2018 3:20:00 PM

Thank you so much, Besma. What a lovely thing to say.

Mike Gentile

Date: 5/11/2018 9:05:00 AM

A beautiful, loving tribute, Line My father was not present in my life Father's day was always a bit surreal for me, Happy Friday xxoo

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/11/2018 3:25:00 PM

Please read my poem Another Father's Day written with a friend in a similar situation as you. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Mike. Most appreciated.

Alfred Berggren

Date: 5/10/2018 9:12:00 PM

Very nice words about your father. They do you well and makes your star shine.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/10/2018 10:10:00 PM

Thank you, Alfred. Most appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/10/2018 6:33:00 PM

That would be a fantastic feeling, Line. I would sure love to feel this in my life if a loved one passed away. My stepbrother Dale was my favorite person in the world , yet I never felt his presence when he left this world.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/10/2018 10:12:00 PM

Ah. Dale is around in subtle ways... Line xx

Jean Murray

Date: 5/10/2018 5:00:00 PM

Beautiful Line. I wrote one similar about my father. The older I get, the more like him I become. I am so grateful for the talents he gave me.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/10/2018 5:32:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Jean. I will have to look up your comment.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/10/2018 3:12:00 PM

Very nice and love how you ended it too :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/10/2018 5:33:00 PM

Thank you so much, Heidi, for your lovely visit.