Thinking of You Mother

I reminisce, I miss
the sound of the stair lift that brings you down,
and your voice as you ask for morning coffee,
mother, the silence is too harsh to bear!

the half knit cardigan that is on your bed,
needles still attached as if you left halfway,
mother, we know you won’t be coming back.

that chair in front of me that you would take,
and rubbing your palms would talk to me,
mother, the cat sits there awaiting your return.

your room is unkempt, things as you left,
I do not have the heart to go in there,
mother, I promise, I shall tidy up today!

today would have been your 90th birthday,
we had plans to celebrate in a grand style,
mother, we have tear drops with cake today.

you glow in us brighter than anytime before,
memories are precious our hearts still sore,
mother, on your birthday, 
I reminisce, I miss.....

1st place win
Written 2nd April 2021 
My mother’s 90th birthday
I reminisce, I miss poetry competition
James Edward Lee Sr. sponsored.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Roper Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 10:52 PM
Congratulations on your win, Krish, a sweet and very heartfelt verse a tribute to your mother! Eve
Radhakrishna Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 11:59 PM
Thanks Eve! Yes, a person I shall miss for ever!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 4:45 AM
This comes from your heart, Krish - and touches other hearts. Every stanza expresses a love - an eternal bond between mother and children. Congratulations on your top win. BW ~ Mala
Radhakrishna Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 4:50 AM
Thanks Mala! Yes, the void is huge and eternal! Thanks for your kind words!
Merryman Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 8:16 PM
Krish, I know its hard to lose a mother. You expressed so much love and sorrow in your poem! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
Radhakrishna Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 12:38 AM
Kim Thanks! Mother is the only person in our lives who gives unconditional love!! ‘God cannot be everywhere, so he made mothers’ is a quote I have lived by all my life!
Watson Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 12:27 PM
I found this very moving,Krish and felt I was in the room with you observing all the reminders of her presence. Really well written.
Radhakrishna Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 1:46 PM
Thanks Wendy! I am so pleased you read my poem and shared my emotions. It has been sudden and a difficult loss to bear. God bless you.
Balasubramanian Avatar
April 2, 2021 at 10:32 AM
I could feel your pain in this write. May God give you peace and strength. Take care, Rama
Radhakrishna Avatar
April 2, 2021 at 10:50 AM
Thanks Rama. Nice to see you back.
Cunningham Avatar
April 2, 2021 at 2:40 AM
A hearfelt write Krish, she's never far from you because she lives on in your heart and mind. Tom
Radhakrishna Avatar
April 2, 2021 at 4:48 AM
Thanks Tom, Yes, I feel like that more and more. Yet, memories are hard to defeat! Thanks for your support.
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