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Thinking of You

Thinking of you Frozen in layers of lemon drop frosting Running for love on the snow covered lawn Longing for all that this evening does offer Finding my dreams all begin with the dawn Dancing to songs on the edge of tomorrow Asking a question I hope will be true Pausing a moment to smile your direction Writing this poem while thinking of you

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Darren White

Date: 1/4/2017 1:39:00 AM

I'd swoon if that were written for me :)

Chris Green
Date: 1/4/2017 8:04:00 AM

Thanks so very much my friend.

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 1/3/2017 6:41:00 PM

I'm looking for your name in the new poems this evening - I am never disappointed.

Chris Green
Date: 1/4/2017 8:04:00 AM

Thanks so very much Sunlite for always leaving such nice thoughts for me.

Agnes Krampe

Date: 1/3/2017 6:04:00 PM

Lovely dancing meter in your poem, Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 1/4/2017 8:03:00 AM

Thank you so very much Agnes for your kind words.

Tim Smith

Date: 1/3/2017 5:38:00 PM

The frozen frosting reminds me of eating the wedding cake on the first anniversary. Beautiful love note Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 1/4/2017 8:03:00 AM

Thanks so much Tim. I am happy you enjoyed this one.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/3/2017 5:25:00 PM

Oh this lady you think of must have her eye twitching all the time. Very romantic, so gentle and full of care...Love that lemon drop frosting.Just lovely.

Chris Green
Date: 1/3/2017 5:34:00 PM

Hey maybe some lemon drop frosting on a warm freshly baked banana bread. :) Thanks so very much my sweet friend for bringing my smile this afternoon.

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 1/3/2017 5:26:00 PM

: )

Jan Allison

Date: 1/3/2017 5:20:00 PM

what a beautiful romantic poem Chris I do love your imagery:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green
Date: 1/3/2017 5:33:00 PM

Thank you Jan for your kind words today. Just got a little lost in thought poetically. :)

Gary Smith

Date: 1/3/2017 5:18:00 PM

Lovely poem Chris :)

Chris Green
Date: 1/3/2017 5:32:00 PM

Thanks so much my friend