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Thinking of You

A curtain of rain obscures my view, as I gaze out my window and think of you. You've been gone for many a year, leaving only memories for me to hold dear. And hold them dear, I do indeed, embracing them when I'm in need. You see, the rain poured down on that day too, as I gazed out the window, thinking of you. A knock on the door and two uniformed men, regretfully informed me of your life's end. 8/28/16 For Broken Wings Five rhyming stanzas - 5 only contest 5 couplets. ( This is fictional)

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Date: 9/4/2016 5:05:00 PM
Wonderful piece though sad...
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Kim Merryman
Date: 9/9/2016 10:01:00 PM
Thank you, Mike!
Date: 9/1/2016 5:27:00 PM
Beautiful Kim..you hold a true gift dear lady :)-luloo
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Kim Merryman
Date: 9/9/2016 9:59:00 PM
Laura, thank you for your sweet, encouraging words!
Date: 8/30/2016 3:17:00 PM
The knoch at the door noone wants to hear. Well done Kim.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 9/9/2016 9:57:00 PM
Thank you, Jean!
Date: 8/29/2016 6:15:00 AM
This is excellent! I think she will really love this entry Kim. 7 ; )
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Kim Merryman
Date: 9/9/2016 9:56:00 PM
Thank you, Connie!
Date: 8/28/2016 11:59:00 PM
Touching...GL Sunita
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Kim Merryman
Date: 9/9/2016 9:56:00 PM
Thank you, Sunita!
Date: 8/28/2016 10:02:00 PM
Me, too - the disclaimer thing (see below - Charlie). This is poignantly touching and goes straight to the heart ... CayCay
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Kim Merryman
Date: 9/9/2016 9:55:00 PM
Thank you, CayCay!
Date: 8/28/2016 7:06:00 PM
I'm glad you included that disclaimer. Best wishes in the contest Kim...
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Kim Merryman
Date: 9/9/2016 9:55:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie!