Thinking of You

I wonder what angel feels like,
Cos it’s been years since I met you,
I wonder what you think of me,
Cos all I do is to think of you…
				                
				                  I keep counting the seconds,
                                                  For you to ring me and say hi,
                                                  Feels good great just wow,
                                                  Am outta this world with thy,
You take me to new highs,
You make me feel low,
My angel my cutsie wootsie,
I think I am addicted to you, 
				               
				               You are always here with me,
				               Playing with my memories,
				               A dream beyond words,
				               An angel outta this world,
May be someday it’ll be true,
May be someday I’ll be with you,
And in my eyes then you will see,
Everything that you are to me…
                                                 I know it's hopeless,
                                                 And you won't think it's true, 
                                                 But day in and day out what this friend does is,
                                                 Just think of you,
                                                 Yeah just think of you...........

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Date: 6/27/2019 8:58:00 PM
Lovely poem, Shiraz.
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Date: 12/25/2015 11:05:00 PM
Hi Shiraz, did you remove most of your poems. Just wondering, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/24/2015 9:35:00 AM
I like the format as much as i do the poem, Shiraz,, a pleasure to read :) have yourself A wonderful Christmas and Happy New Year....... SKAT LOVE
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Date: 8/16/2013 7:16:00 PM
:-)...Linda
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 8/20/2013 4:27:00 AM
:-)
Date: 6/29/2013 5:18:00 PM
nice sentiments good poem Shadow x smiles
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Date: 6/28/2013 11:44:00 AM
I feel you Shiraz...beautiful words!!
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Date: 6/24/2013 6:45:00 AM
Shiraz ~ This is very nice and I am sure you do have an angel. I will continue to read your beautiful words my friend. ~ Debbie K.
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Date: 6/23/2013 4:24:00 PM
Shiraz, don't hide this talent from us.. Post more and I believe you will develop a following. I'll keep my eye on you... You write well and are easy to read.... Jake
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 6/24/2013 10:22:00 PM
Thank you Jake your words mean a lot to me
Date: 6/22/2013 11:25:00 PM
Lovely words Shiraz cant wait to read more....Seren
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 6/23/2013 6:14:00 AM
thanks for the kind of love you seniors have showered on me........
Date: 6/22/2013 2:51:00 PM
I hope it's for PD's angel contest. It fits quite nicely for a sweet angel!!
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 6/23/2013 1:02:00 AM
nops! i wrote it for my girl.Missed to enter the contest......... Thanks a lot for dropping by words from people like you means a lot.......
Date: 6/21/2013 12:29:00 AM
vry pleasant poem...keep writin lyk ds...
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 6/21/2013 5:19:00 AM
glad that you liked this....... :)
Date: 6/18/2013 1:28:00 PM
and I love this one too.....
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 6/19/2013 12:33:00 AM
Oh thanks a lot ! Am honored
Date: 6/18/2013 10:20:00 AM
Welcome to the soup Shiraz, hope to see more from you. I like the poem, kind of heart breaking. I think you should tell her how you feel. I wishing one day she will be with you. thank you for sharing your heart with us*luv ~ SKAT ~
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 6/18/2013 10:38:00 AM
Thank you for the warm reception words from people like you means a lot :)
Date: 6/18/2013 4:51:00 AM
Shiraz this is a beautiful Rhyme..your expressions are untouched with your feelings....I have nothing to say other than i just love the way you express yourself.
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 6/18/2013 5:12:00 AM
Thanks a lot sir...... :)
Date: 6/18/2013 1:32:00 AM
nicely done, wondering if the girl is real ? thanks for liking my I call Her Name poem ;}
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 6/18/2013 1:38:00 AM
lol she exists............ thank you for liking this
Date: 6/17/2013 12:31:00 PM
SHIRAZ, I am lost with the pain you feel for her. it is deep. hopefully one day,,, you will see... xox~ LINDA
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 6/17/2013 1:11:00 PM
Yeah this hope never dies ;) Thanks for dropping in
Date: 6/17/2013 11:59:00 AM
- Shiraz, this is a lovely poem. - I hope that the one you have written it to will be delighted by your words. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 6/17/2013 1:10:00 PM
Hope so but she z yet to hear it......... and I wonder I could ever do that. Thanks anyway for taking out your time
Date: 6/17/2013 3:38:00 AM
Sounds as if someone is deeply in love-absence erase weeks months years but not the memories.Lovely poem
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 6/17/2013 1:07:00 PM
Thank you Charma Yeah one cannot erase memories and memories bring back feelings
Date: 6/16/2013 2:09:00 PM
Wow. Beautiful piece :). Love this
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Date: 6/17/2013 1:03:00 PM
thank you for taking out your time to read this :)
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