Bukang Liwayway Poet Sestina

Thinking of You

Thinking of your smile makes my day,
So inspired to write a poem of what I feel,
Can’t take you out of my mind my dear.
 
In my heart you are my love so dear,
You always make a brighter day,
I hope you really know how I feel.

When I wake up every single day,
I look at your cool picture my dear,
My contented soul shows for what I feel.

You complete my day, I feel so happy dear.




February 24, 2013
For Andrea's Contest
9th Place Winner

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Len Gasun March 11, 2013 at 12:02 AM My biggest congratulations on your awesome win too my dearest friend! I'm peeking at soup using the school lap tap. Thank you so much as well for your congratulatory comments my dear friend! love always, Leonora

Poet Destroyer A March 10, 2013 at 9:37 PM MARIA, this happens to be a xool and exciting new form in which Andrea, introduced for her contest. ~ CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome Tritina winning poem. Take Care, LINDA

Michael Dom March 10, 2013 at 8:57 PM Sweet as! You are so good at tritina Maria. Congratulations!

Joseph May March 10, 2013 at 12:33 PM wonderful write and win Maria...congrats

David Williams March 10, 2013 at 7:41 AM Maria congrats on your win, this is a great dedication to someone...love it...David

Kash Poet March 10, 2013 at 7:11 AM Beautiful poem here Maria!Congrats on the win.

Andrea Dietrich March 10, 2013 at 12:20 AM this was such a sweet happy poem, dear. Congratulations in my contest and thanks so much for your support.

Michael Dom March 1, 2013 at 6:46 AM A fantastic tritina! No doubt. I'm blown away with how much I like it. More Maria!

Steve Humphries Artist February 25, 2013 at 3:41 AM very nice poem, good to see we have good poets in Thailand using English language! Im in chonburi.

Len Gasun February 24, 2013 at 9:27 PM wow, wow! This is extremely beautiful poem with extremely beautiful form too my dearest friend, Maria! I'm so glad to read this today. It's one of your best writes indeed! A grand winner for me! Good luck and best wishes always my friend! love and biggest hugs, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen February 24, 2013 at 12:49 PM A beautiful love poem, Maria. - (Who would you send it to .... a very special guy.) - Luck in contest!!! - Love it, well done my friend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Bukang Liwayway February 24, 2013 at 9:36 AM First time to write this new form, I don't know if I done it right :) Michael Dom March 1, 2013 at 6:45 AM Brilliant write!