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Thinking of a Face

lover number one thinking of a face my love reaches great heights .... I am the falcon lover number two bowed in purity my ceremony of tea I give willingly there is peace to the falcon as he sleeps upon my breast ***The face of whom lover number one speaks can not be visualized by the reader. Rather only by the two lovers, who know what she looks like. So, it remains a haiku within a haiku, an enigma somewhat. Mar 4 2011 for Debbie’s haiku/tanka contest

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/12/2011 8:09:00 PM

ooo, nice,, Im so glad to see you on my comment box.. Charles.. i did not think you would think f me.. but really thanks ..I needed the smile... well since you know me and my sister are a combo... its sad her husband does not want her on the soup no more...leaving me all to myself.. and good luck in the contest.. very interesting,..p.d. (( by the way i think i needed tme off, only so i can find the real poet in me..)) bye..P.d.