Thinking

Thinking "come fluttering words, come drifting words to me . . . " Thinking of the boy last night, Who stole into her room, Who really got the biggest fright, When she lashed out with the broom. Yes he was nice but out of order, Sad eyed he fled away , She didn’t see him here today, Second thought’s about the boarder. Don Johnson 22-july-11 Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~ Contest What is she thinking . . .

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Mike Dailey

Date: 7/28/2011 11:12:00 AM

I knew I could count on you to submit a good poem to this contest. Congrats on the placement. Mike

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/28/2011 7:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your special poem placing in Constance La France's "What is she thinking" contest Don. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/28/2011 12:05:00 AM

I am thinking ..congrats DON on a super special win with these great words of poetic art luv..

Jack Ross Jr.

Date: 7/25/2011 11:27:00 AM

Terrific write Mate......good luck on the contest.......old Jack

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/22/2011 11:14:00 AM

I like your unique take on this contest, particularly the first stanza of this,Don. Yes, other worlds have existed before ours and others will exist after we blow ourselves up. I wish I knew how to travel on the astral plane. One time I almost felt my spirit could leave to do it, but I could not sustain the feeling! My boyfriend as a teen, he told me his aunt could do it.

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 7/22/2011 9:42:00 AM

Ah...that's what she's thinking!? Interesting take on things. Good invention and humour! Good luck in the contest!... Robert.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 7/22/2011 7:18:00 AM

Shame on him, brooms are a valid defence. Best of luck in the contest! :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/22/2011 4:03:00 AM

Good luck in the contest..Very creative work..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work with such encouraging words..Sara

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 7/22/2011 4:00:00 AM

a great and imaginative take on the contest, Don. never would have thought of that one. I enjoyed it and should do quite well. And as for your Johnson quote. I like it. Sensible to the point and logical. you'll might use that in a future write. Thanks for your comment