Thinking

troubled thoughts jockey for position, I walk a bit more slowly today.

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Lin Lane

Date: 10/20/2023 7:55:00 AM

If it’s trouble to the first one across the finish line, let the hares pass you.

John Lawless
Date: 10/20/2023 10:51:00 AM

the rabbit won by a hare,,,tell me he didn't go there....

Ink Empress

Date: 10/20/2023 7:06:00 AM

Walk slowly, but surely will get to the end. Sometimes we just take it slow, go with the flow. Something about this one liner is very melodiously melancholic.loved this

John Lawless
Date: 10/20/2023 10:52:00 AM

more of a menacing melancholic wondering of what the future may hold for my grand kids...