Thinking

troubled thoughts jockey for position, I walk a bit more slowly today.
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Lane Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 7:55 AM
If it’s trouble to the first one across the finish line, let the hares pass you.
Lawless Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 10:51 AM
the rabbit won by a hare,,,tell me he didn't go there....
Empress Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 7:06 AM
Walk slowly, but surely will get to the end. Sometimes we just take it slow, go with the flow. Something about this one liner is very melodiously melancholic.loved this
Lawless Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 10:52 AM
more of a menacing melancholic wondering of what the future may hold for my grand kids...
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