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Think I Need A Man In My Life

Think I need a man in my life-
a dear writer-friend suggested.
So please dismiss and remiss,
prior I've requested.

Thinking, a man in my life,
could really make things right.
he my man could be my fan...
and fan me all the night.

Cleopatra I could be,
he could be my slave...
YES I think I need a man in my life,
excelled in a good wave!

Think I need a man in my life,
makes me very hot.
"Think I need a husband"-
I simply have forgot.

Think I need a man in my life,
that sounds like so much fun.
Winter time he'll be all mine,
a heater like the sun.

Think I need a man in my life,
to bring me lots of flowers...
Chocolates too; must bring a few,
hand feed me for hours.

Would be nice to have a man in my life,
oh how it sounds so sweet.
I could yell- what's that smell and
he could kiss my feet !





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Date: 8/9/2018 2:44:00 PM
Like yo' stuff !
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Date: 7/28/2018 9:03:00 AM
Girlllllllll!!!, Can't ever go wrong with a TRUE GODLY man??? Brilliant write.. As a young male poet once said "follow me as I follow Christ, but only as I do, follow piece with ALL men" ~~Also Congrats to your POTD win.. James :)
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Date: 7/26/2018 4:13:00 PM
We've never met, but you seem to know me so extremely well!! lol Great poem! I enjoyed reading it. Congratulations on it being chosen as POTD.
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Date: 7/21/2018 9:37:00 AM
Hello Paris, Congratulations on the POTD honor!! A very interesting theme for sure. Excellently done in every respect. Keep up your great writing!! Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 7/21/2018 10:32:00 AM
Hello Gary Bateman, Nice to see you again, Always doing art here ^^ =D Thank you !!
Date: 7/20/2018 1:11:00 PM
Haha. A perfect sense of our desire for companionship and dominance. Its good to feel your view of ambivalence. Love your work, Paris-Maree.
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Date: 7/20/2018 1:52:00 PM
I give you feelings-WoW that's a wonderful comment, am sincerely happy you loved, Thank You Very Much Kevin Lawrence !
Date: 7/19/2018 7:15:00 AM
Many congrats on POTD:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/19/2018 7:19:00 AM
Thank you Jan Allison xoxoxoxo
Date: 7/18/2018 4:10:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD with this cute poem. Well done!
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Date: 7/19/2018 7:18:00 AM
Thanks so much Susan Gentry, I appreciate it :)
Date: 7/18/2018 1:11:00 PM
You hit a six or a home run as they say here...Congratulations my friend...you surely worked hard and deserve all of it...A big hug Paris...
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Date: 7/19/2018 7:13:00 AM
Thank you my friend, Thanks very much ! :)
Date: 7/18/2018 12:57:00 PM
I get the feeling you don’t exactly warm to the idea!Still it gave you food for thought to pen this cynical yet wishful thinking piece.After all it’s okay if you get a good one.Wish you luck Paris.
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Date: 7/19/2018 7:12:00 AM
I think I need a good one.... LOL =D Thanks for the comment Sylvia Coulstock!!
Date: 7/18/2018 12:11:00 PM
What a fun write Paris-Maree but be careful what you wish for, your dream man could turn into a nightmare lol!:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/19/2018 12:38:00 AM
You are so right Jan Allison, and the very last thing I want is nightmare-poems produced from such dreams *noting-be careful when dreaming a man* Thanks for the good tip =D
Date: 7/18/2018 11:17:00 AM
Very cute. Congratulations.
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Date: 7/18/2018 11:52:00 AM
Thanks so much, Sunlite Wanter ^^ :)
Date: 7/18/2018 10:48:00 AM
A fun and smoothly flowing poem, Paris-Maree. Enjoyed the giggles. Congratulations on your wonderful POTD honors.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/18/2018 11:09:00 AM
Great comment, Thank You Susan Ashley !!!
Date: 7/18/2018 9:26:00 AM
Congrats on your POTD, Paris-Maree. Well done.
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Date: 7/18/2018 11:05:00 AM
Thank you Warren Doll, really appreciate your congrats here =D
Date: 7/18/2018 8:34:00 AM
YAY!!! Back with POTD congrats! Have a spectacular one Paris-Maree :) xomo
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Date: 7/18/2018 11:04:00 AM
THANK YOU so much Maureen McGreavy!!!
Date: 7/18/2018 8:19:00 AM
Congrats on your POTD, Paris-Maree. A really fun read !!!
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Date: 7/18/2018 8:54:00 AM
Am happy you liked Mike Gentile, Thank you :)
Date: 7/18/2018 7:37:00 AM
You need a man...I need a woman...Hey!...Congrats!!! on your POTD! Paris-Maree...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 7/18/2018 8:54:00 AM
Hello there Winged Warrior ;) lol
Date: 7/18/2018 5:26:00 AM
- Gave me a big smile ... congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. Paris-Maree - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/18/2018 8:52:00 AM
Good! Good!! Good !!! for you have a great smile Sunsmile =D Paris-Maree <3
Date: 7/18/2018 4:45:00 AM
Back with congratulations on your poem being chosen as POTD, good luck
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Date: 7/18/2018 5:20:00 AM
Thanks again Faraz Ajmal, Kindest Regards Paris-Maree :)
Date: 7/18/2018 4:15:00 AM
Haha.. great sequel!
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Date: 7/18/2018 5:00:00 AM
Thanks Lyric Man :)
Date: 7/18/2018 2:29:00 AM
Back with congratulations on POTD Paris, hopefully it will reach a wider audience. You might get your chocolate factory yet lol. Tom
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Date: 7/18/2018 4:52:00 AM
Hahaa Tom Cunningham, lurving your humour !! Also Thank You very much for the congrats, am flattered. TY again !!
Date: 7/17/2018 10:34:00 PM
This one brought me a chuckle; cool poem -JT
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Date: 7/18/2018 4:49:00 AM
Thanks for sharing your comment Honestly J.T ! Mostly, I like to make people happy :)
Date: 7/17/2018 2:23:00 PM
Lol, I really enjoyed reading this wonderful poem of yours, it is alot like your previous poems on how you need a husband, believe me that I read the story of Cleopatra and If I am right, then even she was used to love her husband really much, i can be wrong since it was a passage in my exam, I again wish you best of luck in finding that guy, food luck, ps,I can see pattern here and I think that you reall like chocolates, am I right? Just a thought, good luck and have a really nice day
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Date: 7/17/2018 2:50:00 PM
I'm happy you enjoyed it Faraz Ajmal, re to Cleopatra hmm thanks for reminding me- i think i need a husband now lol !! Thank you for your well wishes :) I do like chocolate YES though I also like honey, Ferrero Rochers, strawberries with chocolate....etc etc etc
Date: 7/17/2018 12:18:00 PM
Lots of fun in that write...Nice one Paris Maree
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Date: 7/17/2018 2:46:00 PM
Was fun and flowed easily and so fast ! Thank You Arturo Michael =D
Date: 7/17/2018 10:46:00 AM
I like this rather good little fun poem with tongue in cheek chuckles. It flows well, the word choices are excellent and the theme is consistent throughout. Emile.
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Date: 7/17/2018 11:07:00 AM
I'm glad you liked Emile Pinet, thanks for dropping by and commenting :)
Date: 7/17/2018 9:15:00 AM
Lol! Deliriously fun read ; p xomo!
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Date: 7/17/2018 9:23:00 AM
Am so happy you liked :D Thanks Maureen !!!
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