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Things You'D Teach Your Child

Children exceed the doves that we were given. They are graces sent forth from God in heaven. Despite one's capacity to innovate and teach, Dawn facts to tutor, given in eloquent speech.  Wisdom gained in life radiates alike the sun. But recall the spirit of self, literacy, and fun. Relish the moon calmly; don't let hiccups swoon. Never let your spirit wane alike a morning moon. Keeping one's mind and emotions in harmony We feed you with flame straight from the armory. Have ethics and treat all with care and fairness. God's trust will bear you a deeper awareness. While twirling life, don't ignore fresh food or vitamin. Adopt care of yourself, and never drive after Heineken. You should dress how you feel most comfortable. Don't strain as another; clones are unremarkable. Study enough for it, but not so much as to panic. A fresh crew offers hope for the modern Titanic. Never let others sway you; rather, follow the breeze. Blend kindness and brawn alike waving flowers of trees. Such as clay, be calm, and don't let emotion bury you. Be selfless in the aid of those who follow you through. We are affluent only when our feelings are healthy. Be humble in glory, gentle in grief, glad, and stealthy. Set aside some quiet time to pray every night. Life will strike you with grief, so tackle it and fight.
Written: February 09, 2023 The 12 Things You'd Teach Your Child Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Matt Caliri

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Date: 3/27/2023 6:57:00 AM
Great advice to pass on to a child with both wisdom and love... I like your use of some very clever and interesting rhymes throughout this poem. Very well done! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 3/13/2023 2:55:00 AM
Exciting while reading this poem Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 3/13/2023 1:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win dear friend !
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Date: 3/12/2023 9:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win. A powerful/wonderful write. Love It. Have a blessed day/week......................
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Date: 3/11/2023 11:08:00 PM
Great job placing 5th on my contest of 35 entries! Loved the first line, you had me hooked from there. Loved the language/word choice in this piece.
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Date: 2/22/2023 4:59:00 PM
A list of morals befitting to your character sir! Beautifully written and widely appreciated. Salutations A.S.
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Date: 2/11/2023 4:17:00 PM
Excellent work, as usual, Lasaad:-) A guaranteed winner in the contest, my friend.
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Date: 2/10/2023 6:51:00 AM
I like your list of teachable things to offer a child especially the next to last one. First, we should pray and all will work out somehow. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Your visit to my page was inspiring. Sara
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Date: 2/10/2023 6:05:00 AM
Sagacious advice as how to proceed in life. If parents give the right guidance to the children, they will behave well , provided we are true to what we say and act accordingly. "Be selfless in the aid of those who follow you through. We are affluent only when our feelings are healthy. Be humble in glory, gentle in grief, glad, and stealthy." Love this part !
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Date: 2/10/2023 5:44:00 AM
Words of wisdom my friend. Your teachings resonate throughout.
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Date: 2/10/2023 2:26:00 AM
The problem with this world is that we don't teach the proper fundamental truth, especially to our children.
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Date: 2/9/2023 9:11:00 PM
I too, love the message, here, Lasaad, they are the next generation, a continuation of the species.
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Date: 2/9/2023 8:47:00 PM
Monumental words of advice Sotto, not only to teach to children but adults too… Belle
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Date: 2/9/2023 6:36:00 PM
You have established a foundation worthy of its recipients, Lasaad, constructed words that fortify one's future--your endeavors serve you well, Aloha, William
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Date: 2/9/2023 5:05:00 PM
Great poem and a timely message for all of us: Thanks for your kind thoughtfulness and deeply appreciated advice!!!
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Date: 2/9/2023 12:19:00 PM
- "Blend kindness and brawn alike waving flowers of trees" is one of the greatest lessons in life, Las ... lovely poem :) - Best wishes in the contest, Las :) - hugs
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