Things That Remained

There was only a little confusion left in his breath,
cheap whiskey had dried up nearly everything but
the stale taste of her name.
So, he spoke it.
The small boy inside, 
the one with the bruised cheeks
and chubby lobes. 
The quiet one.
       The one that had nothing but love, for everyone.
In that moment, he was revived. He reached out.
For his friend.
                                 But she was across town.
She wouldn't recognize his voice anyhow,
she had never met this boy.
She had only seen the scruffy,
clench jawed face of the man that
boy had become.
The broken spirit
and bitter joy. 
The drunk. 
                          The anxious. 
The shattering facade.
 
He lights a cigarette and looks to the sky,
wondering if she'd answer the phone.
What she would say?
Is there anything left to say? 
He decides that there is.
It's the only words willing to brave
the journey. The only truth that remains.
"I'm sorry."
-James Kelley 2013, All rights reserved.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 12/25/2013 10:56:00 PM
I enjoyed this. Especially the first three lines :)
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James Kelley
Date: 12/26/2013 7:34:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed the read Dyana. Hope you had a great Christmas!
Date: 12/14/2013 9:36:00 PM
Hi James, I'm fascinated by your writing and prose style. Can I ask , How long you've been writing? Instead of assuming... The poem above is touching and deep. The flow and questionnaire are very deep.. I'm enjoying what I've read so far... Take care.. LINDA
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Date: 12/14/2013 10:55:00 PM
I've been writing since 6th grade, the last few years with much more passion than before. So happy to see that my words have resonated with you. Thank you so much for the comments, I'd love to read something of yours as well...but I'm off to bed for now. I believe you're the one that suggested a contest? I'll check it out first thing and have a chance to get acquainted with your work as well/ Thanks again Linda . Peace and love.
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