Things

Things Having new toys Impressing others New cars, minks,sinks Getting is living Saving stinks

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Laura Spears

Date: 2/7/2010 2:28:00 AM

Great poem. Congrats on the feature. I like the rhyme at the end.

Chamonique Knowles

Date: 2/6/2010 8:17:00 PM

love it, congrats on being featured

John Freeman

Date: 2/6/2010 10:20:00 AM

Awesome feature this week Sis. Congratulations, on a well deserved feature presentation. Sincerely, love, mowes

Katherine Stella

Date: 2/6/2010 5:33:00 AM

well deserve showing sara made me smile cause saving does such esp when you only get paid 2 times a month lol great write and thanks for your many comments on my stuff

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/4/2010 7:13:00 PM

Congrats Sara on your featured poem on the Soup this week... excellent write as always... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 2/4/2010 5:45:00 PM

Congrats Sara, on "Things" being featured. Vince

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/3/2010 7:15:00 AM

Congrats Sara on your featured poem of the week on Soup..luv..Linda-Marie..

Daver Austin

Date: 2/3/2010 7:13:00 AM

Congrats on this selection, Sara. This is a very youthful view. When one gets very old, one learns to be stoic about missing such things as things. But I completely agree:saving "stinks"! Love, daver

Sue Mason

Date: 2/1/2010 4:13:00 PM

LOL wonderful here, Sara !! Minks and sinks ... LOL ... who would've thought ... what an excellent selection to be featured this week here at the Soup. Congratulations!!