Things

Things 
Having new toys
Impressing others
New cars, minks,sinks
Getting is living
Saving stinks

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Laura Spears

February 7, 2010 at 2:28 AM

Great poem. Congrats on the feature. I like the rhyme at the end.

Chamonique Knowles

February 6, 2010 at 8:17 PM

love it, congrats on being featured

John Freeman

February 6, 2010 at 10:20 AM

Awesome feature this week Sis. Congratulations, on a well deserved feature presentation. Sincerely, love, mowes

Katherine Stella

February 6, 2010 at 5:33 AM

well deserve showing sara made me smile cause saving does such esp when you only get paid 2 times a month lol great write and thanks for your many comments on my stuff

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 4, 2010 at 7:13 PM

Congrats Sara on your featured poem on the Soup this week... excellent write as always... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Vince Suzadail Jr.

February 4, 2010 at 5:45 PM

Congrats Sara, on "Things" being featured. Vince

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 3, 2010 at 7:15 AM

Congrats Sara on your featured poem of the week on Soup..luv..Linda-Marie..

Daver Austin

February 3, 2010 at 7:13 AM

Congrats on this selection, Sara. This is a very youthful view. When one gets very old, one learns to be stoic about missing such things as things. But I completely agree:saving "stinks"! Love, daver

Sue Mason

February 1, 2010 at 4:13 PM

LOL wonderful here, Sara !! Minks and sinks ... LOL ... who would've thought ... what an excellent selection to be featured this week here at the Soup. Congratulations!!