Thingamajig in the Frozen Tundra-DHR

In the frozen tundra, marvelous drugs;
   no one can reproduce.
Rub raw your eyes, soar high, shiver.
   For your frozen blue eyes,
only, in the loneliness of snow and ice.
   Descriptions beyond sight, touch,
as if you’re in an ethereal illumination.
   The dogs howl and hoof
but they do not hold up as witnesses.
    This thingamajig
                        frazzles
                       frightens
                         excites
                          shocks
                        chills
                           warms
                       brings joy
You can never find this thingamabob;
   it finds you and ruins you.
Drink ruins you; you see strange things.
   But this is an elixir; a spectral something
that was formed out in the midnight sun.
   Capricious as the wind, sifting like
dessert sand, almost certainly invented
   by time itself, set apart for isolated
journeys of one, or more (if you count
  the dogs). Silent witnesses are just
as curious, but have no human voice.
  Like a living branch, was it cut off
from the rest, caught off guard; reformed?
  Perhaps, it is good and evil, at best;
it can do tricks (ask the dogs).
  Remember, the saying, ‘Make like a tree,
and leave…”
  This whatchamacallit, took the human at his word.
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Crandall Avatar
July 3, 2026 at 4:53 PM
Congratulations on your ribbon! It seems like a pretty mysterious thingamabob!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 3, 2026 at 6:43 PM
Thank you, David! Strange things happen out there!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 11:39 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! I enjoyed reading your creative write. Great Ending... I have been off Soup for 2 weeks. I needed an Ink Transfusion. Hahaha!!! Now back and ready to go. Writing Away... Have a wonderful day with your wonderful win.............
Rodrigues Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 7:33 PM
Thank you so much! Glad you had some time off!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
May 26, 2026 at 4:58 AM
wow! awesome write, truly a solid conteswt contender. I'm impressed. hugs, Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
May 26, 2026 at 5:18 AM
I appreciate you saying so! I know it is a bit different.
Hind Avatar
May 23, 2026 at 7:46 PM
This is deep, like an experience of a thing rather than the viewpoint?- of the thing itself....its "drug" is endless looking....amazing work, dear Kim <3
Rodrigues Avatar
May 23, 2026 at 8:44 PM
Thank you, Paige! Hugs
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