Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Rhyme

Thin Screened Nature - a Compression Poem

Thin screened nature
                                             Unable to grasp
                                       Splendiferous structure.
                                             Feel the humility
                                             Glory of the God
                                              Bursts forever


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                                     28th Sept'2013

                                     Dr. Ram Mehta
                                     
                                      7th place win in

                                     Contest: Compression poem by nette onclaud

              ** Syllables checked on PS syllable counter**

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Richard Lamoureux October 13, 2013 at 8:09 AM Well done Dr. Ram!

Poet Destroyer A October 10, 2013 at 8:29 PM Dr Ram, ... Congratulations on your awesome win in Nette's contest... always~ LINDA

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders October 9, 2013 at 10:00 AM Dr Ram, congrats on your winning poem! Just wonderful!! Love and blessings, Rhonda

Skat A October 8, 2013 at 8:23 PM Dr Ram .......... congrats on your win.......... LOVE ~SKAT~

Sara Kendrick October 8, 2013 at 5:32 AM Expressive winning work..Congrats on your win..Sara

Andrea Dietrich October 6, 2013 at 1:32 AM this one is very well done.Dr. Ram. Love it. and congrats for your win.

Joyce Johnson October 5, 2013 at 10:33 PM Very nice . congratulations. Love, Joyce

Carrie Richards October 5, 2013 at 10:33 AM So much said, in so few words. What a wonderful compression of poem! Congratulations!

Kash Poet October 5, 2013 at 9:34 AM Congratulations on your win Dr.Mehta.

Oluwatomiwo Akinyemi September 28, 2013 at 3:08 PM Dr mehta, this is a good write. Thanks for stopping by on my page....

Kash Poet September 28, 2013 at 1:14 PM Very nice Dr.Mehta.Enjoyed the read.Best wishes for Nette's contest. I am fine.

Sara Kendrick September 28, 2013 at 8:36 AM Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Russell Sivey September 28, 2013 at 6:21 AM This is a wonderful entry into Nette's contest, I really enjoyed reading it this morning! What a delightful piece, quite the glorious poem, Great Work!!

Demetrios Trifiatis September 28, 2013 at 6:12 AM Wisdom in a nutshell!