Thief of Grace

You’re certainly missing out
Whilst you’re fooling about
And you’re swimming in doubt
So I shall certainly you out-rout
I’d advise you to be on the lookout
For I’m your rival, far more worthy a scout
Take heed or you’ll end up looking like a lout
All I can tell you for now is that you’re missing out

While you’re looking away
Twirling in relentless dismay
Your insolence successfully leads you astray
So He finds me in greater favour every day
Unlike you, I’m eloquent with words that gently sway
The God with whom for hours on exhausted knees I stay
‘Till the last hour of the night a dear prayer to say
With heartfelt sobs and a submissive heart I pray away

I whisper, “Dear God of mercy, show me your face
For I am a sinner in need of Your saving Grace
For years in meditation and supplication I’ll chase
The benedictions You bestow unto the winners of the race
The so-called ‘faithful’ ones who cautiously pace
In the promising path which for them You daily trace”
I solemnly utter, “My heart with Love and Faith do interlace
So I can one good day be worthy of seeing Your glorious face”

If you were smart, you’d take after me
Vigilant and sober at all times you’d be
So from the snares of the enemy you’d easily flee
Who’s literally got you down on one knee
Yet too proud you are for your life to give an earnest plea
No diligence whatsoever for efforts to be free
Indeed that thief I am, the thief of grace, you see
Watch out, or you’ll lose all your blessings to me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 7/31/2014 2:56:00 PM
Aj.... This is a very good post. well crafted and very meaningful ....... Sorry for being so tardy in commenting..... Don't give up.... You have talent to offer this site..... Jake
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Jesz Ika
Date: 8/14/2014 10:21:00 PM
really? Will keep on harder. Thank you,sir. It's really no big deal.bless you
Date: 6/1/2014 10:48:00 AM
Hi AJ, nice to know you: I enjoyed the first stanza that rhymed so well one after the other. I especially love the last stanza where you making a deal with God to give you Grace (Clever) GOOD WRITE!
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Jesz Ika
Date: 6/1/2014 12:37:00 PM
Thank you, Ralph. Pleased to meet you. Thanks a million for the positive feedback hey. Yeah kind of a devious move there, huh? I'm sort of new here and I like how friendly the poetry community has been. So your input is much appreciated. Take care.
Date: 5/29/2014 10:17:00 AM
Very nice poem...I love all the rhyming...Noelle
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Jesz Ika
Date: 5/29/2014 3:01:00 PM
Oooh thank you Noelle. I appreciate that you took out time to read my poem.Thanks.xoxo
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