Valsa George Poet Rhyme

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October-10- 2025

My Challenge for October Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Andrea Dietrich

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Thickened Uterus- My Challenge

(I had severe endometriosis that led to infertility. Through years of treatment and after a laser surgery, (not common in India at my time, so got it done in the U.S.)  my condition improved and had two sons born to me after 12 years. But endometriosis came back with greater vengeance and at the age of 39, got my uterus and ovaries removed)

Ever since I became a 'woman', suffered from acute pelvic pain
After marriage, waited for years with rising anxiety, to fondle a baby
The boon and blessing of every mother, but for me, a bane.
With every menstrual cycle, I saw hopes withering away.
Running from clinic to clinic, doctors found endometriosis, my swain.

With laser surgery, the condition was more or less rectified
And two fledglings were born into our nest- two adorable sons.
Still the villain had his onslaught. In me, he continued to bide.
At 39, terminated the culprit that gave me constant aches.
Now with two organs missing, through life’s current, I peacefully glide.

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Bj Legros Kelley November 14, 2025 at 5:24 PM Modern medicine is so amazing. I'm glad that you were blessed with two sons, despite the challenges and pain that you experienced. I also rejoice with you that you were able to finally be free of the pain! Your bravery is encouraging from beginning to end <3

Andrea Dietrich November 3, 2025 at 1:40 AM It's so nice that despite this woe, you were able to have some kids. I know people with this problem . NO fun. Thanks for your participation in my contest with this descriptive explanation of your history with endometriosis. Congrats for your win in my contest. Valsa George November 3, 2025 at 5:30 AM Hi Andrea, thank you for your empathetic attitude and the placement given.

sara Etgen-Baker October 10, 2025 at 5:50 PM Your poem conveyed your pain and struggle. Your attitude is great and delighted that you were able to birth two sons....outstanding! This is a touching poetic work and solid contest entry. Hugs, Sara

Paula Goldsmith October 10, 2025 at 1:45 PM I enjoyed reading your amazing write/story. Glad you got your 2 boys. "Good Luck" Have a Blessed day/weekend writing away.........

Sam Kauffman October 10, 2025 at 11:15 AM My Dearest Valsa, thank you for your courage and your courageous story. This is a subject that seems to be unspoken with few having the courage to expose the pain and suffering of women with this condition! I have a dear friend who also suffered with endometriosis. She and her husband were able to have one child who has blessed them with grandchildren. Know that, even though this is now resolved, I keep you and your family in my thoughts and prayers. Blessings and hugs, dear friend!