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Enter the quickening Earth wind and fire sand Pulsating purple pork pie presence Varacus viscus veinns Like bullets piercing brain baloon targets Knocking them from scaffolding block's like humpty dumpty sat on maple honey Oh eye's wide shut with solent flagpole running up dancing kite like on the breeze Unbound me, find me, free me from this stained glass mirror looking back To dream a trip of light fandango carousel fairground ponies aboard a ferris wheel of cotton candy Clutching such winning prizes ranging from goldfish to teddy bears With a pocket full of sixpence left enought to catch the last bus home Or play the slots jackpot , jackpot all the lucky 7even's

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Date: 10/17/2020 2:19:00 AM
I'm not sure what it means, but it sounds good!
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 10/18/2020 12:56:00 PM
Beth you just deciphered it in 1 it's true actual meaning. Nothing but the pure unadulterated love and joy of stringing words together. Word's that collectively sound good in unison
Date: 10/13/2020 5:38:00 AM
Interesting poem has a fairground feel to it, but I'm not sure if that's correct ..
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 10/13/2020 7:06:00 AM
Cheers S.1 in all honesty not quite sure myself just a jumble of collective circus words