They Walk Amongst Us

amongst the billions of people
there be some very sensitive
to others feelings...pains
sensed and unconscious
expression digested
they present statistical
probability they can read minds...
that is only just part of this 'scenario'
a situation where-in people hide
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Schack Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 6:47 AM
nice poem . we live in a world mixed with real souls interspersed with zombies. check out mine maybe on the soup for daniel schack. feel free to feedback. be well.
Blown Avatar
September 4, 2019 at 11:16 PM
real souls are like the medium norms of mathematics with the fourier series...it's in all of nature; light, sound, life, expression, thought, all species, and things perceived
Ashley Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 10:53 AM
Hmm, a thought provoking and meaningful poem, Sand. This intrigues me.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Blown Avatar
September 4, 2019 at 11:12 PM
do any two people see the same thing?
Man Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 9:46 AM
Your write makes me want to read more on this idea.. thank you!
Blown Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 10:32 AM
will comply...will dream...will write...resistance is futile... sand : )
Krutsinger Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 10:35 PM
A favorite for me.
Blown Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 12:05 AM
thank caren...if i can't please a reader i'm not much of a writer
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