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They took those too

She had no more tears
Crushed ~ fate tore her heart to pieces
They'd taken everything she had


Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: 1st place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 6:54 PM
I can relate to 'no more tears' -- fate can sometimes tear our hearts to pieces. I appreciate the poignant nature of this war-like poem
Gauthier Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 7:03 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Sara ~
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