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They Took My Darling Away From Me

We spent the Holidays together, Jimmy was a great guy always welcoming his guests at the door; Barbara was his wife: a fine lady with gentle and affectionate ways... her kindness touched us tenderly! When tragedy stroke she sought solace in us, and we hugged her and comforted her; losing her husband to a stroke was a tragedy and herself being ill tried to subdue his memory, by not weeping, until the tears returned reminding her that her sweetheart was dead... as she sadly stared at those whithered lilacs! At the wake, she stood by her husband's coffin and whispered, " They took my darling away from me: he was all I had and all I ever have! " We stood next to her grieving with deep commotion, tears released much pain and invited us to pray: death didn't weaken us, we sought strength from love! Before we left the funeral home, she thanked us for being her friends in such sorrowful moments; we could tell that her grief was alleviated by our sympathy; yes, our presence lifted her loneliness and anguish momentarily!

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Date: 3/27/2018 5:00:00 PM
Awesome write , congratulations on your win, Andrew .. Have a nice Easter weekend :) Hugs eve
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Andrew Crisci
Date: 3/30/2018 8:29:00 AM
Good morning, Eve. I like to thank you for your kind comment on my winning poem. It was very thoughtful of you. Enjoy your Easter weekend with your family. May the peace and love of Christ fill your life with joy and serenity. Hugs, Andrew.
Date: 3/25/2018 4:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrew.
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Andrew Crisci
Date: 3/30/2018 8:36:00 AM
Good morning, Kai. I am very glad to read your comment on my poem. I have appreciated your kindness. Enjoy your Easter Holiday and may God bless you and keep you safe. Kind Regards, Andrew.
Date: 3/24/2018 11:09:00 PM
Well done, Andrew. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/24/2018 8:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this touching poem about true caring.
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Date: 3/22/2018 4:38:00 PM
Congrats on words of beauty.. People sometimes around durning time of shock. Learned more important to be around later when others have disappeared and reality sets in. Congrats1
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Date: 3/22/2018 3:54:00 PM
- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Andrew :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/22/2018 3:53:00 PM
Hi Andrea, This poem shows a remarkable friendship. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/22/2018 3:34:00 PM
What a great friend you are Andrew, my mum always told me that when someone dies, that is when those who are mourning need a friend the most... Congratulation on your first place, we should all be there for one another, so we can all be strong..
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Andrew Crisci
Date: 3/25/2018 7:23:00 AM
Goodmorning, Silent One. I hope all is well with you and your family. I thank you for placing my poem in your inspiring contest. I am very moved by your words. giving comfort to others when they lose someone is the consolation they seek to get through those sad moments. It has been a pleasure and a joy to have been honored with this accomplishment. I wish you all the good things in life. Have a wonderful weekend and :) always. Kindest Regards, Andrew.

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