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They Told Me To Follow My Heart

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Rebuilding yourself, after losing the love of your life, by finding a new love of your life.

Broken in pieces, nothing would work, Couldn’t hold onto a thought, Shattered like a mirror all over the ground, My love had had to abort, From slow down, be steady, enjoy the whole ride, Don’t look back while I’m moving along, It changed from that to a chaos of light, In a prism that would never belong, But now all my broken and ripped apart feelings, Can smoke a peace pipe and restart, And bit by bit, one shard at a time, Create a new tender filled heart, And create our own beautiful masterful piece, Create a world where we can be true, And we can choose to be hot and sexier than safe, Since I’ve absolutely fallen for you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/15/2018 7:02:00 AM
Sweet ending..lovely, meaningful depiction as always!
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Date: 3/18/2018 11:33:00 PM
Thank you Vijay :)

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