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They Say Death Is Cruel

Not a cruel master; a humble assistant;
To visit or not, cannot be done by his choice.

Always carries a portfolio under his arm,
A pre designed schedule saying when and where to attend.
He comes not, though invited; uninvited, stops not coming.
Sometimes comes like an unconventional rain.
He is the mark of beginning and ending of life.
But how unlucky he is! 
Always listens to no other emotions except mourning.
Silently tolerates all curses showered.

His job  is endless.
No single applause for him.
Perhaps, in Nature
The one and only who is
Blamed for his utmost promptness





Let's Mix It Up Poetry Contest
Verse poetry form only.
Sponsored by: Constance La France 
Date: 18-10-2021.

Placed : 3rd

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Constance La France

Date: 11/4/2021 2:46:00 PM

Patri, wonderful write and congratulations on your win in my Let's Mix It Up Contest ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 11/5/2021 1:19:00 AM

Thanks a lot for the best compliments.

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/3/2021 6:32:00 PM

Dear Patri, the deep, rich and meaningful imagery of your poem is truly amazing. An exquisite personification of Death. Your last two lines are a grand finale to a superb piece. Congratulations for your excellent win in Constance's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 11/4/2021 8:45:00 AM

Thanks a lot for reading my poem and the best compliments.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 10/31/2021 1:26:00 AM

"comes like an unconventional rain", " listens to no other emotions except mourning" - Beautiful thinking. Congratulations!

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 11/4/2021 8:43:00 AM

Thank a lot for the appreciation.