Get Your Premium Membership

They Found Their Dream House

They Found Their Dream House

By Elton Camp

A large family home Joe and Sue required
With a quick sale as their lease had expired

A fixer-upper, they agreed, would have to do
So limited resources made the choices few

With the realtor they had spent a whole week
As the house of their dreams they did seek

“I know that what we want is hard,” Joe said
The agent, with a wry smile, nodded his head

“There’s a really large place here on my list
And on a quick sale the owners firmly insist.”

“It has all of the features that you say you need
But it’s been empty a while and gone to seed.”

“About this place, someone actually wrote a book
It’s getting dark, but we can go and take a look.”

“And your anxiety about price I can sure relieve.
It’s set so far below appraisal you won’t believe.”

So that is how Joe and Sue finally came to own
A house priced low, though large & well-known

Finding such a bargain surely gave them a thrill
Since prices are usually quite high in Amityville

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/12/2011 12:09:00 PM
good final couplet! because surely it's not a bargain and they will be getting a different kind of thrill after they move in! nice story :)
Login to Reply
Camp Avatar
Elton Camp
Date: 10/12/2011 2:11:00 PM
Hey Susan, Thanks for reading and taking time to comment. I wasn't sure how this one would work since it totally depends on the reader knowing the story of the "Amityville Horror." Elton

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry