They Break Apart

Loves and lovers are parts in a play 
	acted from need or passion, 
	necessity or happenstance or duty 
	or merely not to be lonely for a while. 
	Loved in considered or unconsidered ways, 
	given or withheld,
	perhaps with tenderness, 
	perhaps terror,
	conscience or unconsciousness,
	in dark rooms lit by a single bulb, 
	in the sunlight of bluets and corn flowers, 
	on a stage, with a script and other actors, 
	an audience, and the potential 
	for success or disaster.
	If terrible enough or not attended to, 
	the play closes after a single performance, 
	finished almost before it’s begun.
	It may enjoy a long run, 
	the audience growing larger with each recital. 
	Most though become mere skeletons 
	draped with the dry skin of life, 
	a dragging-on rote performance bereft of passion.
	They end this way.  
	They break apart. 
	They just do.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Ruebel Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 11:36 AM
Hello Jack, You have captured both sides of the miracle of love. Both the Dark and light I dare say. Well done. Lov, Shar
Jordan Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 11:47 AM
Thanks again, Shar... jack
Macfarlane Avatar
March 15, 2013 at 9:27 AM
The quest for love and passion will always have us searching for our part in the play....touching write Jack! Hugs
Jordan Avatar
March 15, 2013 at 10:11 AM
That's true, and the hope is for the play to have a long run. Jack
Carrillo Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 5:23 PM
Loves and lovers are part of a play. That is all we really are. It's like a show and we are the preformers. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
Jordan Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 8:42 PM
You're welcome, and thanks for reading it. Jack
Harper Avatar
March 12, 2013 at 6:26 PM
What a terrible cruelty death can be, I love the begin and the end is so sad.
Jordan Avatar
March 12, 2013 at 7:36 PM
The ending is sad, but not for everyone. Some survive. Jack
Andresen Avatar
March 12, 2013 at 8:27 AM
Yeah, that's today's society - Well written Jack! - Nice to read something from you again. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Jordan Avatar
March 12, 2013 at 9:12 AM
That does seem to be the unfortunate way it works. Its good to hear from you too. Jack
Jones Avatar
March 11, 2013 at 9:56 PM
Very well put Jack. Liked it...
Jordan Avatar
March 11, 2013 at 10:23 PM
Thank you, Donna.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 11, 2013 at 1:47 PM
you never know what play or person will catch anothers eye.. Each one is a mystery that may never be fully realized. Well written Jack.
Hicks Avatar
March 11, 2013 at 11:31 AM
A very elegant way to say "It's better to have loved and lost than to have never loved at all"... passion is one of things that sets us apart from the animals... without it who are we? Great musings here...
Heemstra Avatar
March 11, 2013 at 8:33 AM
Well put! Thanks for the read.
Jordan Avatar
March 11, 2013 at 8:39 AM
And thanks for the comment...
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