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They All Laughed

THEY ALL LAUGHED An acrostic sonnet They all laughed when I told them How much I loved you. Everyone said we were too young. Yet, right from the start, I knew At your age, they told me Love is just in your head. Later you will see we were right. ater, we laughed at what they had said. All these years have passed and still Unwavering our love has been Golden wedding bells ring out. How we wish they could have seen. Every day we are thankful we Did not listen; you and me 22nd September 2022 Anniversary Poetry Contest Sponsor - Sandra Kendrick

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/17/2022 6:43:00 AM

No one really knows whose marriage will last. Love must be in the mix. And when God is present in the union that bond, even when things get difficult, have a fighting chance. Congratulations on a beautiful write, Bryn!

Constance La France

Date: 10/16/2022 2:22:00 PM

Bryn, wonderful acrostic and congratulations on your win in Sara's contest, blessings Constnce

Terry Flood

Date: 10/16/2022 11:30:00 AM

Funny how some people love to spout that worn out mantra: “It’ll never last.” Annie and I heard it all thirty seven years ago. I don’t know whether they’ve changed their minds yet. Congrats on both your win and your golden years, Bryn. Terry

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/16/2022 6:25:00 AM

Congratulations on being on the winners' list in my contest. I was excited to see who I had chosen to be on the winners' page myself. Way to go. Sara

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/3/2022 7:58:00 AM

Glad you did not liste. I did not either. We eloped from The Midwest to San Francisco in a snowstorm! I still wear the gold wedding band, though he has passed away long ago. Great poem…. Pangie

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/13/2022 8:11:00 AM

Bryn, I wrote a poem about it, maybe I should do another! I don’t recalll the title or what year…. That elopement was exciting enough to be a movie! Honestly! Very unique… Pangie

Bryn Strudwick
Date: 10/13/2022 7:39:00 AM

Thank you Pangie. What a lovely story yours is. Bryn

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/23/2022 6:06:00 PM

Congrats, Bryn. A lovely tribute to love ~