These Women

THESE WOMEN

these women
always smiling    whispering
i wonder
is it me
or are they dismantling a friend?

Dave Austin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Ward Avatar
October 6, 2015 at 12:07 PM
I enjoyed this, Daver.
Dietrich Avatar
September 20, 2015 at 1:24 AM
ahhh, you do a good tanka, Daver!!
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