These Thoughts

Empowering the few we stand 
devided under Heaven,
Intersections with destiny 
always seemingly consistent,
Still with Chance being choosey 
there will be always be 
exceptions,
Or is that God acting seemingly 
non existent.

Could our advances as humans 
not be destiny?      
Destiny being God in a form of 
higher meaning,
Or are we lucky- made from 
chance and plain to see.
Invisible truths hold my life idle 
while it tries my being.

Surrender to the stars I gaze at 
while exhaling disbelief,
I Inhale hope for a deeper 
meaning yet feel void,
Hope still filling parts of my 
emptiness become bitter sweet.
My life as the watcher while 
listening to this constant noise.

These Thoughts.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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May 30, 2014 at 3:35 PM
lovely poem
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