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These Feelings I Want To Bury

These feelings for you I just want to bury right beneath the caress of those cherry scented kisses which captivate and carry my mind to the finest places laced with heavenly graces where people have no traces of our moments, of you and I from now, from today until we die when you smile and when you cry be there for the two giving my all to you painting the grey sky blue Pleased with us must be the weather Since the sun shines when we're together My sweet love, the sun will shine forever

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Skat A

Date: 10/18/2016 11:00:00 PM

MOUSSA, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/11/2016 11:11:00 AM

So sweet, Moussa, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Moussa Reslan
Date: 10/11/2016 9:23:00 PM

Thanks for this Linda, you definitely have made me feel welcome and encouraged. I'm thankful for the support and it sure does seem like a friendly poetic community where everybody is supportive. I too love reading and writing poems so I look forward to having a read of your work. I'm always open for feedback as I haven't studied poetry but I have a strong passion to write, so any tips or guidance is always welcome. Thank you once again my new poet friend :)