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These Eyes

Despite your transcendental airs,
     No windowed soul invites your gaze.
These eyes have steered a thousand stares,
   Through labyrinths of smoke and haze.

Copyright © David Mohn | Year Posted 2015

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Andrea Dietrich

October 1, 2016 at 7:25 PM

wow, DAvid. I just love reading your poems and it was a real treat finding this one from that winners list a few weeks back. Congrats.

Sunita U.D Palawon

September 23, 2016 at 10:25 PM

What is transcendental is so beautiful...Well done! :)

Beautiful Scars

September 23, 2016 at 10:56 AM

beautiful david..congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo

Francis J Grasso

September 23, 2016 at 7:04 AM

Well done, David! Congratulations! ...Fran

Kai Michael Neumann

September 23, 2016 at 6:42 AM

Good stuff. Congratulations, Kai

Andrea Dietrich

June 23, 2015 at 12:19 AM

You are so good at these kinds of little poems, David. A well deserved win. Congratulations.

June 22, 2015 at 4:33 PM

:) Congratulations on your win. Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

June 22, 2015 at 3:41 PM

David, Congratulations awesomely done. LINDA

June 22, 2015 at 2:41 PM

Beautifully expressed, especially the second part of this poem. #7 Congratulations on a top podium finish, David. // paul

June 22, 2015 at 1:55 PM

Hi David: very profound! Good Write. Congrtulations!

Shadow Hamilton

June 22, 2015 at 2:16 AM

well portrayed David congrats on win hugs

Francine Roberts

June 21, 2015 at 8:48 PM

magnificent, congrats on your win

June 21, 2015 at 3:18 PM

deep and beautiful many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

June 15, 2015 at 1:53 AM

David, that is deep

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