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These Brick Bound Boxes

these brick bound boxes fill this equinox of smart headed people of these independent achievable people critical analysts of this 21 century ready to be presentable to the unmighty smaller population of antisocial teenage children willing them to be not to be free, but inside these brick bound boxes that fill the human intelligence with total literate irrelevance to who we should be to who can be ultimately like them filled in these brick bound boxes with mental instimulance of a mix of lies, creation and motives see, I don’t have a problem with any of them just these brick bound boxes that hold them hold this unforgettable willing mind of someone we chose to leave behind in these brick bound boxes that encompass first the mind and then the soul but who wants all this control? society can speak of a whole. an incredible strong mental image of how life is to be-- within these brick bound boxes. My life isn’t based in these brick bound boxes but it soon will creating a song of the monotone dead longing to be passed on from generation to generation but can't you see can't you forget that this is not who we ought to be unless we need to spontaneously combust in this equinox till it metastasizes catastro sizes to an everlasting dust even you must ought to smell the musk. So tell me, how do thee? how do thee live with these brick bound boxes filling up every empty not-yet-set concrete whole implying of who you are before you could even have some kind of control over yourself its swept under the rug. no biggie, you're just a kiddie no actual value to this reality yet before you can buy alcohol and I’m someone to sound big I just don’t want to fill these lonely brick bound boxes where the death of every living will cease to be a beginning in this equinox of the everlasting dust, so do you must, live in these brick bound boxes?

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Date: 2/28/2016 7:59:00 AM
nice to see this one again. LINDA
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Date: 1/7/2016 8:32:00 AM
:) SKAT .
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Date: 10/8/2014 1:04:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Lottie- I choose your first very well written free verse - Like it ! - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/7/2014 4:45:00 PM
Hi Lottie, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/7/2014 10:58:00 AM
Lottie,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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