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These Beautiful Parts of You

When you're sad and down with worry The way your eyes look so deep And stress splays on your soft cheeks You look so beautiful and cool, really But I never like that you do not feel good 'Cause it makes me feel bad too When your bright eyes shed those diamonds tears Oh, how so you look beautiful my dear But that I know there are cinders in those droplets It makes me feel like there's a splinting ember in my chest Darling, I do not like it when you become distressed I do not feel good when you are not happy Though, at those moments you still look pretty

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Date: 3/11/2018 8:03:00 PM
Indeed beautiful....
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Date: 5/23/2017 10:35:00 AM
This poem is absolutely capturing and breath taking , s it fictional though or it's from your real life ? Hope it's from the second cause she must be the most luckiest girl in the world to have such a wonderful human being who writes to her these beautiful words and to stand by her side , excellent write my dear , hugs // :)
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Date: 5/23/2017 4:12:00 PM
I'll say your comment made my night, it's really so awesome to read that. though I wish I can stand by her side right now...cause she is far away from me lol. thanks for the lovely comment dear, best wishes
Date: 5/22/2017 2:40:00 PM
You certainly show your empathy for your loved one in this piece :) Very nice!
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Date: 5/23/2017 4:08:00 PM
thanks Carol, empathy is more the word for it, we all have it for our dear ones (no matter how little)...and I owe it all to her, I appreciate your warm comment, best wishes

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