These Arms Long To Hold You

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These Arms Long To Hold You The first time we met, I knew you were stress, Met again, and again, I stopped counting, Your photo at work, cannot stop glancing, Promised me, you would not leave, you said yes. Signed the papers and all within minutes, Not a couple, a temporary tease, For the guys in the office, that did please, Your life seemed always joined to some pivots. Hope your past, is no longer your present, After all, you did give me your promise, Not go church on me, a doubting Thomas, Chose a path away from me, not was meant. You had me believe that your words were true, Promised your word, signed here your signature, Well, lawbreaker, you are my prisoner, I am the law, these arms long to hold you. 2019 September 22 *1st Place* All Yours (May 23) ~~Brian Strand: Judged 2021 May 23 *3rd Place* Pick A Title, Vol 9 - Enclosed Rhyme ~~Edward Ibeh: Judged 2019 October 03 #2. These Arms Long To Hold You

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Date: 5/28/2021 3:47:00 AM
Creative work. Congrats on your winner. Sara
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Hilo Poet
Date: 5/28/2021 11:09:00 AM
Welcoming words, Sara, I think highly of you my friend, Aloha!
Date: 5/25/2021 7:35:00 AM
BEAUTIFUL POEM, SAYS A LOT, CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN!
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Date: 5/25/2021 7:45:00 AM
I appreciate your kind expressions, Daisy, Aloha!
Date: 5/23/2021 10:07:00 AM
excellent ink William, many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/23/2021 10:25:00 AM
Thanks, Jan, I appreciate you, Aloha!
Date: 5/23/2021 5:28:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Date: 5/23/2021 7:14:00 AM
Thank you, Christuraj, Aloha!
Date: 10/3/2019 9:59:00 PM
Congratulations, William on your win with this wonderful poem.
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Date: 10/3/2019 10:03:00 PM
My many thanks indeed ~ Aloha always William
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