There's Tomorrow (I Hope)

I was set to post a blog today
Then saw the note that said one more day
I've finally mastered a comment or two
And say hats off to POETRYSOUP

Since I've moved my computer been in a glitch
Nothing I'd do would heal it's itch
Then poetrysoup had their big spill
And all of my dreams went down hill

Yesterday, I really got mad
And ran a program I didn't know I had
When it came up with 42
My heart was broke, my computer was through

Or so I thought

I read a little farther and there I found
A whole bunch of things they said made it unsound
I grited my teeth and said what the ------ well
Marked all of the spots and punched the bell

When all was said and done
It said it had taken care of 71
I thought than what is left
I wrote an e-mail and it was blessed

Today I got back to you
And wanted to write a blog too
But a note said not right yet
So I wrote this poem for you instead

I just think of the problems I've had
And bow my head in shame
For if I had had the problems like poetrysoup
All our dreams would go up in flames

So I'll wait a few more days 
Knowing I'll write a blog soon
And until then if I get anticy
I'll do what the cow did and jump over the moon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 12/8/2009 11:09:00 AM
Neat rhymes man, No promise of tomorrow tho, I got myself a Quad processor, faster! Sincerely Moses
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Date: 7/24/2008 10:13:00 AM
Me and you both, sweetie. At least you vented by writing about it. My artwork was lost, when I tried. Now I have to start over. Sigh... This was very honest and well written. Things will be running normal soon, I pray. Love, Ivy
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Date: 7/23/2008 9:28:00 AM
It's a lot faster, but there is something to be said for a computerless world. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 7/13/2008 11:46:00 PM
Good work here Marycile.To post a blog go to your member page toward the bottom in P/Mmber section there is a link to use.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 7/11/2008 1:30:00 PM
loved this poem, well wrote flowed very nicely, kept you reading it to very end. very cute also.
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Date: 7/11/2008 7:02:00 AM
Cile,my dear friend you will not be jumping anywhere do you hear me? Just getting you back into shape not wanting no more hurting for you. Be patient and it will all work out you know that in your heart. Now take a chill pill. lol Love you my friend, Carol
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Date: 7/11/2008 5:13:00 AM
Beautiful tribute to our soup here and so wonderful to read you as always. Been having trouble commenting on you last few days. Hope this goes through. The other day the sky was magnificent with fluffy multi-dimensional clouds and I thought of you and your last poem. Have a great weekend Cile. Love & hugs, Shar xoxo
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Date: 7/10/2008 7:25:00 PM
Cile sorry, I must have run past you yesterday. Anyhow hoot it's good to have the soup up and running even if not at full throttle. And better yet seeing the names of people I have come to respect and care about posting again, Blessings your way, your friend, Ron
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Date: 7/10/2008 6:22:00 PM
you wrote an excellent piece through all of the chaos. I know how you feel. I felt so disconnected when I clicked on it said,,,sorry under construction...We're back in action now...Great write
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Date: 7/9/2008 3:22:00 PM
Cile - regarding that trip over the moon - "can I go Mom" - good poem - I'll be watching for that blog -love you Cile
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Date: 7/9/2008 2:54:00 PM
Marycile, I can truly appreciate your work here and hope things start getting better for you as they have for me by finding this site and sharing my talents with all these great folks and commenting on fine words of poetry like this. Good Job. MPK
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Date: 7/9/2008 2:18:00 PM
Hello Cile, what a wonderful poem. Some beautiful words of tribute to the efforts of those who are reassembling the Soup. Nice to read your poetry again. My best to you, Charlie
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Date: 7/9/2008 11:36:00 AM
I think this wonderful poem was a reward after your troubles. Nice tribute to Poetry Soup too. Thank you for sharing these thoughts with us and for your kind words regarding my poems. Keep on writing my friend. Karen
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