There's a window in my bathroom

There's a window in my bathroom.

I catch myself looking out of it 
every day
every night 
every hour

I see them all
parading around, full of joy
of hope
of meaning

I scan their faces for acknowledgement 
hoping the light left in my eyes is still enough.

But they never peer upwards 
instead they march forwards 
their gazes transfixed on the day or night ahead

And I am left in the dark
waiting for new faces to reappear.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Agustin Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 2:14 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Croft Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 10:49 AM
What an interesting view from your bathroom!
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