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There's a Shark In My Soup

There’s a shark in my soup Sat down at the bowl just about to begin When what did I see but a little gray fin Swimming around and making a loop A strange sight to see down there in my soup I reached for the can just couldn’t resist I needed to check the ingredient list Noodles and chicken and carrots it read Celery, spices was all that it said I looked down again and now I could see A mouth full of teeth that were grinning at me Two beady eyes and a tail at the back It seemed that my soup was about to attack So quickly I reached and grabbed for my spoon The whole time just wishing it was a harpoon I stabbed and I splashed then I had to regroup And yelled for my mom “There’s a shark in my soup!” It’s then that she shook me I opened my eyes It didn’t take long for me to realize That I was asleep laying safe in my bed That shark in my soup it was all in my head She said, “I’m so sorry you had a bad dream How about I go get you a bowl of Ice Cream” I answered her, “Yes, that would be really great But instead of a bowl could you just use a plate” Written for: Shark in the soup Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Anthony Slausen

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Date: 3/12/2019 2:57:00 PM
Delightful! Hilarious and shows your ingenuity and mounds of creativity, Thank you! Love, Panagiota
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Chris Green
Date: 3/12/2019 3:05:00 PM
Thank you so much. I am happy you liked it.
Date: 1/15/2019 4:19:00 PM
Lol :).Am going to sleep very soon..Hope I won't dream of your shark in my soup :) :).Loved this...Goodnight Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/15/2019 4:37:00 PM
I am happy you liked it my friend. Sweet dreams not shark dreams. Ok? :)
Date: 1/7/2019 2:03:00 AM
Hi Chris, I'm just coming to say congratulations on a well deserved win:-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 1/9/2019 10:28:00 AM
Thank you so much Alexis
Date: 1/6/2019 5:34:00 PM
back with congratulations :)
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Chris Green
Date: 1/9/2019 10:28:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 1/6/2019 4:22:00 PM
oh this is wonderful. One of those dream sequences, huh? But you finished off with a Platter. Loved it!!
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Chris Green
Date: 1/9/2019 10:28:00 AM
Yeah I know, they get old at times but that's what I came up with. :) Thanks so much Andrea.
Date: 1/6/2019 2:27:00 PM
I'm so pleased to see this one one the winners' list, Chris. Congratulations on your success in Anthony's contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Chris Green
Date: 1/9/2019 10:26:00 AM
Thank you so very much Carolyn
Date: 1/6/2019 10:10:00 AM
This would have been my choice for first. Pure fun!! Congratulations on a very entertaining write.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/9/2019 10:26:00 AM
Thanks Ed, I am glad you liked it so much
Date: 1/6/2019 7:18:00 AM
Very witty, Chris. Love it. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/9/2019 10:26:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend
Date: 1/6/2019 4:59:00 AM
Ha ha, a fun and witty poem. congratulations on your win!
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Chris Green
Date: 1/9/2019 10:25:00 AM
Thanks Tania, I am happy you liked it
Date: 1/6/2019 3:47:00 AM
I still adore that ending Chris sheer poetic genius:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Chris Green
Date: 1/9/2019 10:24:00 AM
Thanks so much Jan
Date: 1/1/2019 10:01:00 PM
how did I miss this till now??? What clever fun!
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Chris Green
Date: 1/2/2019 8:48:00 AM
Thank you so very much P.S.
Date: 12/28/2018 1:37:00 PM
A belter of a tale Chris, much enjoyed. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/28/2018 1:55:00 PM
Thanks so much Gary
Date: 12/26/2018 3:34:00 PM
LOL Could just imagine this with illustrations, Chris. Very clever and creative! Best wishes in Anthony's contest. Hope you had a Merry Christmas! Hugs, Carolyn
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Chris Green
Date: 12/26/2018 3:54:00 PM
Thank you so much Carolyn, I am very happy you enjoyed this one. It was fun to write. :)
Date: 12/19/2018 9:07:00 PM
Clever! A fun one that if illustrated would make a great book! Love it, Chris!
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Chris Green
Date: 12/20/2018 7:41:00 AM
Thanks so very much Kim.
Date: 12/19/2018 7:18:00 PM
absolutely adorable, chris! love it!
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Chris Green
Date: 12/20/2018 7:41:00 AM
Thanks so much Ilene
Date: 12/19/2018 7:03:00 PM
G'day Chris … this is a really good fun poem. At first I thought how can write a poem as long as you did on a silly topic like this - but you nailed it - well done Chris - Lindsay
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Chris Green
Date: 12/20/2018 7:41:00 AM
Thanks so much Lindsay. It's easy for me to get long winded about anything. :)
Date: 12/19/2018 6:31:00 PM
Chris, wonderful, I loved where you took this theme, and your humor is great ~
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Chris Green
Date: 12/20/2018 7:41:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend.
Date: 12/19/2018 5:00:00 PM
oh so witty Chris I do love to see your humour in your poetry:-) hugs jan xx
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Chris Green
Date: 12/19/2018 5:08:00 PM
Thanks so much Jan. I'm thrilled this one tickled your funny bone.
Date: 12/19/2018 2:24:00 PM
This poem is so inventive and delightful Chris. Anything is possible in dreams! Best for a win in the contest. It is a winner for me! : ) xxoo
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Chris Green
Date: 12/19/2018 2:43:00 PM
Thank you Connie. I am happy you enjoyed this one so much. Just a little bit a nonsense for the contest.
Date: 12/19/2018 2:15:00 PM
Hi Chris, I enjoyed your take on the contest theme. It caused to think about the bad dreams I had as a kid. I found this to be adorable and funny at the same time.This looks like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 12/19/2018 2:21:00 PM
Thank you so very much my friend. I am thrilled you enjoyed this.
Date: 12/19/2018 1:11:00 PM
i had a similar nightmare after watching 'jaws' on cable... you so funny, chris!,,,huggs
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Chris Green
Date: 12/19/2018 2:16:00 PM
Thank you Nette. I know what you mean about Jaws. That was terrifying
Date: 12/19/2018 12:55:00 PM
OMG! I am cracking up laughing. Great one Chris! Well done! :)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/19/2018 2:15:00 PM
Thanks so much Heidi. I am happy this one made you laugh
Date: 12/19/2018 12:21:00 PM
Haha that gave me a laugh Chris, I even had that suspenseful jaws music in my head. Good luck in the contest. Tom.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/19/2018 12:24:00 PM
Ha, thanks Tom. And just when you thought it was safe to read poetry again. :)
Date: 12/19/2018 11:59:00 AM
Oh that one is priceless; best of luck in the contest.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/19/2018 12:04:00 PM
Thanks so much M.L. I just started writing it and had no idea where it was going or how to end it. Fortunately I came up with something

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