There's a Shark In My Soup

There’s a shark in my soup

Sat down at the bowl
just about to begin
When what did I see
but a little gray fin
Swimming around
and making a loop
A strange sight to see
down there in my soup
I reached for the can
just couldn’t resist
I needed to check 
the ingredient list
Noodles and chicken
and carrots it read
Celery, spices
was all that it said
I looked down again
and now I could see
A mouth full of teeth
that were grinning at me
Two beady eyes
and a tail at the back
It seemed that my soup
was about to attack
So quickly I reached
and grabbed for my spoon
The whole time just wishing
it was a harpoon
I stabbed and I splashed
then I had to regroup
And yelled for my mom
“There’s a shark in my soup!”
It’s then that she shook me
I opened my eyes
It didn’t take long 
for me to realize
That I was asleep
laying safe in my bed
That shark in my soup
it was all in my head
She said, “I’m so sorry
you had a bad dream
How about I go get you
a bowl of Ice Cream”
I answered her, “Yes,
that would be really great
But instead of a bowl
could you just use a plate”


Written for: Shark in the soup Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Anthony Slausen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Romios Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 2:57 PM
Delightful! Hilarious and shows your ingenuity and mounds of creativity, Thank you! Love, Panagiota
Green Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 3:05 PM
Thank you so much. I am happy you liked it.
Chircop Avatar
January 15, 2019 at 4:19 PM
Lol :).Am going to sleep very soon..Hope I won't dream of your shark in my soup :) :).Loved this...Goodnight Chris.
Green Avatar
January 15, 2019 at 4:37 PM
I am happy you liked it my friend. Sweet dreams not shark dreams. Ok? :)
Y. Avatar
January 7, 2019 at 2:03 AM
Hi Chris, I'm just coming to say congratulations on a well deserved win:-) Alexis
Green Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 10:28 AM
Thank you so much Alexis
Awtry Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 5:34 PM
back with congratulations :)
Green Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 10:28 AM
Thank you so much
Dietrich Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 4:22 PM
oh this is wonderful. One of those dream sequences, huh? But you finished off with a Platter. Loved it!!
Green Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 10:28 AM
Yeah I know, they get old at times but that's what I came up with. :) Thanks so much Andrea.
Devonshire Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 2:27 PM
I'm so pleased to see this one one the winners' list, Chris. Congratulations on your success in Anthony's contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
Green Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 10:26 AM
Thank you so very much Carolyn
Morris Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 10:10 AM
This would have been my choice for first. Pure fun!! Congratulations on a very entertaining write.
Green Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 10:26 AM
Thanks Ed, I am glad you liked it so much
Gauthier Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 7:18 AM
Very witty, Chris. Love it. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Green Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 10:26 AM
Thanks so much my friend
Kitchin Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 4:59 AM
Ha ha, a fun and witty poem. congratulations on your win!
Green Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 10:25 AM
Thanks Tania, I am happy you liked it
Allison Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 3:47 AM
I still adore that ending Chris sheer poetic genius:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Green Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 10:24 AM
Thanks so much Jan
Awtry Avatar
January 1, 2019 at 10:01 PM
how did I miss this till now??? What clever fun!
Green Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 8:48 AM
Thank you so very much P.S.
Smith Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 1:37 PM
A belter of a tale Chris, much enjoyed. :)
Green Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 1:55 PM
Thanks so much Gary
Devonshire Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 3:34 PM
LOL Could just imagine this with illustrations, Chris. Very clever and creative! Best wishes in Anthony's contest. Hope you had a Merry Christmas! Hugs, Carolyn
Green Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 3:54 PM
Thank you so much Carolyn, I am very happy you enjoyed this one. It was fun to write. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 9:07 PM
Clever! A fun one that if illustrated would make a great book! Love it, Chris!
Green Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 7:41 AM
Thanks so very much Kim.
Bauer Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 7:18 PM
absolutely adorable, chris! love it!
Green Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 7:41 AM
Thanks so much Ilene
Laurie Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 7:03 PM
G'day Chris … this is a really good fun poem. At first I thought how can write a poem as long as you did on a silly topic like this - but you nailed it - well done Chris - Lindsay
Green Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 7:41 AM
Thanks so much Lindsay. It's easy for me to get long winded about anything. :)
La France Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 6:31 PM
Chris, wonderful, I loved where you took this theme, and your humor is great ~
Green Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 7:41 AM
Thank you so much my friend.
Allison Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 5:00 PM
oh so witty Chris I do love to see your humour in your poetry:-) hugs jan xx
Green Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 5:08 PM
Thanks so much Jan. I'm thrilled this one tickled your funny bone.
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 2:24 PM
This poem is so inventive and delightful Chris. Anything is possible in dreams! Best for a win in the contest. It is a winner for me! : ) xxoo
Green Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 2:43 PM
Thank you Connie. I am happy you enjoyed this one so much. Just a little bit a nonsense for the contest.
Y. Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 2:15 PM
Hi Chris, I enjoyed your take on the contest theme. It caused to think about the bad dreams I had as a kid. I found this to be adorable and funny at the same time.This looks like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
Green Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 2:21 PM
Thank you so very much my friend. I am thrilled you enjoyed this.
Onclaud Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 1:11 PM
i had a similar nightmare after watching 'jaws' on cable... you so funny, chris!,,,huggs
Green Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 2:16 PM
Thank you Nette. I know what you mean about Jaws. That was terrifying
Sands Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 12:55 PM
OMG! I am cracking up laughing. Great one Chris! Well done! :)
Green Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 2:15 PM
Thanks so much Heidi. I am happy this one made you laugh
Cunningham Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 12:21 PM
Haha that gave me a laugh Chris, I even had that suspenseful jaws music in my head. Good luck in the contest. Tom.
Green Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 12:24 PM
Ha, thanks Tom. And just when you thought it was safe to read poetry again. :)
Kiser Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 11:59 AM
Oh that one is priceless; best of luck in the contest.
Green Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 12:04 PM
Thanks so much M.L. I just started writing it and had no idea where it was going or how to end it. Fortunately I came up with something
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