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There Were Six of Us Now

my murderer was long gone
I had felt his dissatisfaction upon his departure
Knew I had died too soon to please him
there would be other victims

the snowy months were the best,
soothing me a bit, for when the ground was hard
I felt at piece, knowing he would not be bringing any new victims
They were all young like me, unrested, afraid, at first 

The snow usually settled them down a bit, 
we communicated with each other, 
I felt happy I was no longer alone.
There were six of us now.
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Theraven Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 1:46 PM
Caren, Wonder what a numerologist would think of this six. What a telling tale in this 'whodunnit' poem akin to Agatha Christie's works. 'There Were Six of Us Now' is certainly a thought-proving write. -Richard
Krutsinger Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 2:01 PM
Thank you Richard. I appreciate it.
One Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 3:17 AM
Dark one this one... You expressed it very well..
Krutsinger Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 2:01 PM
Thank you Silent One. I am glad you stopped by.
Grahamburglar Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 2:04 AM
Dark, and fascinating. There are so many questions, lol. This would make for a really interesting writing prompt. Thanks for sharing. =)
Krutsinger Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 2:02 PM
Thank you. Feel free to write the rest of the story.
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