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There is nothing left

You know that feeling when someone tells you something and a pound of bricks get stored on your shoulders like a pounding in your heart, its not the best feeling in the world and I just don't know how to react to it should I say nothing and lie agreeing or speak up. But I'm weak I'm chasing the sun with my eyes no words left tired and weak, there's no devotion, am I waisting my time am I making a mistake. There's nothing to do but chase the sun with my eyes slow an sad with bricks and poundings. There is nothing left.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 7/31/2013 8:33:00 AM
nice one, interesting write
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Date: 7/24/2013 2:42:00 PM
Very sad feelings but I know them well, I enjoyed reading your wonderful words! Laura :0)
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Date: 7/21/2013 5:00:00 PM
I understand this feeling. This was very strong, despite the pain. Well done!
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