Brittney Lopez Poet ABC

There Is Nothing Left

You know that feeling when 
someone tells you something 
and a pound of bricks get 
stored on your shoulders like a 
pounding in your heart, its not 
the best feeling in the world 
and I just don't know how to 
react to it should I say nothing 
and lie agreeing or speak up.
But I'm weak I'm chasing the 
sun with my eyes no words left 
tired and weak, there's no 
devotion, am I waisting my 
time am I making a mistake. 
There's nothing to do but chase 
the sun with my eyes slow an 
sad with bricks and poundings.
    There is nothing left.

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Steven Mitchell July 31, 2013 at 8:33 AM nice one, interesting write

Laura Mckenzie July 24, 2013 at 2:42 PM Very sad feelings but I know them well, I enjoyed reading your wonderful words! Laura :0)

Poet Tacito July 21, 2013 at 5:00 PM I understand this feeling. This was very strong, despite the pain. Well done!