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There Is a Star With My Name On It

Each night after dark I gaze up above Seeing two dazzling stars almost bursting with love These two iridescent exquisite cut diamonds Their kaleidoscopic incandescence truly enlightens Two glistening precious jewels twinkle in the sky Two names shining brightly and as I wonder why Both were taken far too soon Both were loved up to the moon My dearest darling ~ his soul went first I truly thought my heart would burst So deep in grief my soul immersed Then my precious boy ~ my only one So sudden So unexpected So wrong to go before his mum They took a part of my grieving heart Leaving such pain and sadness At times I am feeling so alone As I walk through my door to an empty home Now seeing two stars way up high Lighting up the dark night sky I see their names I feel their smiles So far away ~ So many miles There is a star with my name on it For when my soul is beckoned home My name emblazoned from afar Will gently guide me to my star At home at last in a starlit sky My soul so full of joyous joy for ‘tis me * my darling * and my precious boy * Written 8th November 2020 Contest: There is a star with my name on it Sponsor: Silent One 2nd PLACE

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Date: 11/14/2020 7:13:00 PM
Wow! You are a maestro at writing heartfelt truth. Amazing! Bravo Ann
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/15/2020 12:41:00 PM
Caren that is such a compliment and I thank you my friend. Of course it comes straight from my heart... with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 11/12/2020 6:21:00 PM
Ann, your mourning emotions spill with poignant beauty on to the wanting page where others with grieving hearts can take comfort in your golden poetic artistry. I absolutely loved your last three lines so full of comfort and joy. A deep rich emotive piece, my friend. Congratulations for your excellent win in Silent One's contest.. ~Susan
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/15/2020 12:44:00 PM
Dear Susan your beautiful poetic words are such a comfort my friend and I thank you so much. Such compliments from yourself are so welcome for you are such talented poet. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 11/12/2020 8:46:00 AM
A sad and painful take on the contest... there is no pain like loss and you wrote a deeply emotive poem for this contest.. Congratulations on your placement..
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/12/2020 10:31:00 AM
Thank you so much for my placement in your contest SO and thanks too for taking the time to sponsor and judge these contests, much appreciated. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 11/7/2020 10:24:00 PM
I see that star every evening. Keep twinkling. ~~
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/8/2020 9:07:00 AM
yes I do too dear Victor... thank you xx
Date: 11/7/2020 8:53:00 PM
This is a heartfelt story. My heart goes out to you, but know I that your star is shining bright... xoxo
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/8/2020 9:06:00 AM
Thank you so much Akkina for your kind words of comfort and how lovely to meet you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

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