There Is a Secret

I wish to tell you,
I'm alive.
But not all wishes can come true,
Don't you think?
I wonder will we ever see each other. 
I know you can feel me.
And there is a secret,
That you wish to tell me.
But ain't nobody breathing, 
Gonna believe your words.
Because I never existed for them.
And you walked in the rain,
Hoping it will wash awat all your pain.
But there is a secret you hide.
What friendliness you show, 
Even though I am not alive.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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A. Avatar
January 2, 2024 at 1:20 AM
May I know the secret now haha? Lovely poem. Keep up the good work
Agustin Avatar
October 27, 2023 at 1:38 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Ziaika Avatar
October 28, 2023 at 12:44 PM
Thank you so much!
Croft Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 10:25 PM
Very nice
Ziaika Avatar
October 28, 2023 at 12:44 PM
Thank you so much..
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