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There Is a Secret

I wish to tell you, I'm alive. But not all wishes can come true, Don't you think? I wonder will we ever see each other. I know you can feel me. And there is a secret, That you wish to tell me. But ain't nobody breathing, Gonna believe your words. Because I never existed for them. And you walked in the rain, Hoping it will wash awat all your pain. But there is a secret you hide. What friendliness you show, Even though I am not alive.

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Date: 1/2/2024 1:20:00 AM
May I know the secret now haha? Lovely poem. Keep up the good work
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Date: 10/27/2023 1:38:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Innea Ziaika
Date: 10/28/2023 12:44:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 10/23/2023 10:25:00 PM
Very nice
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Innea Ziaika
Date: 10/28/2023 12:44:00 PM
Thank you so much..

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