Eileen Manassian Poet Iambic Pentameter

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There Is a Place

There is a place of beauty, I believe
where dwells all goodness and serenity
I place I enter when I must conceive
A bond of deep and sweet affinity

The sunshine always lights this blessed place
I see my dreams and feel a tranquil breeze
And sunrays dance with joy upon the face
Of ones I love who've come their pain to ease

This place is well secluded in my heart
A gateway leads from there to verdant mind
I take your hand and ask that you take part
Of fruits of fantasy that there you find

We stroll in bliss in this my paradise
There is no evil, and there is no fear
Our outer robes discarded, no disguise
For there is none but you whom I hold dear

No word escapes our lips, but our eyes speak
Of love that does defy the greatest rhyme
We turn to strength those things which made us weak
And taste a peace that is unbound to time

I keep this place for you inside my soul
You need not fear the sting rejection brings
In sacred place of heart, you will feel whole
My love will there transform to angel wings

Jade Celeste

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Richard Lamoureux July 18, 2015 at 8:49 AM I thought this would be a nice place to come back to. It appears I am right. Some great comments as well.

Carolyn Devonshire March 15, 2015 at 4:39 AM Dear Jade, I believe many of us keep a sanctuary within us so that we may escape the tribulations of day-to-day life. It's wonderful to have such a place. I could see it vividly in the images you created, Jade, and it's much like the peaceful venue stored within my heart too. Beautifully written! Love, Carolyn Eileen Manassian March 15, 2015 at 4:41 AM Thanks ever so much, Carolyn. I'm so pleased you passed by...I've been remiss in visiting you. Will be by to read some more. I passed through some difficult days of depression...but I'm in a better place today. Hugs

Shane Cooper March 15, 2015 at 1:27 AM I am glad you are feeling better My Enchantress, your poem is beautiful and i envy you that you have such beauty secluded in your wonderful heart. Mine is a dessert. Love Shane Eileen Manassian March 15, 2015 at 8:18 AM Shane....I often feel like you do...Believe you. A few days ago...I thought I'd never come back to the soup. I needed to think and re-evaluate. I still don't have all the answers. I don't know why people lie and stop caring. I don't know why....But I can't give up on those who really care for me. I reach out...if it is important...I reach out. Thanks for sharing your feelings. It's not just the community, Shane. It's me. I sometimes wonder if what I write is OK...One day I will walk away...but I'm not ready yet. Thanks for caring. Shane Cooper March 15, 2015 at 6:25 AM I do not think I believe in love any more nor do I think friendship counts for much. Dog eat dog hey! You should not have to change your ID it is fundamentally wrong. I do care what you think about me but I have to say leave that place it is not where you or your children can flourish freedom of expression is a human right not determined by your peers but by your God Eileen Manassian March 15, 2015 at 4:42 AM Oh Shane....please look at the word before love..... ;) Try to make your heart...a dessert instead of a desert...all will be well. Mine is often dry and brittle too. This is life and we become scarred...but we need to fight...Hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis March 14, 2015 at 7:00 PM Yes, there a place of beauty that we create in our heart for to be able to live what we are dreaming of but we cannot in reality find! Yes, there is a place of beauty where our soul shelter takes when nothing outside is the way we hope for. Yes, there is a place of beauty that with much work and patience we can make it come true, dearest Jade and this I wish to happen to you! Eileen Manassian March 15, 2015 at 8:19 AM Yassas...O kalos mou Thaskalos. O ekspinos...O Kalos. How are you? Your post is wonderful. I struggle, as well you know. There are days I am filled with despair and days I am walking on air...It is the mad life I live. Those who love me truly....stay around. Thank you for being there for me. Blessings.

Richard Lamoureux March 14, 2015 at 8:52 AM This sounds like a lovely place Eileen. Eileen Manassian March 14, 2015 at 8:55 AM Thank you, Richard. Very few people can visit. Only the nearest and dearest. :) Thank you for the visit.

Charmaine Chircop March 14, 2015 at 6:01 AM Yes there is that place with a taste of peace Eileen..How beautiful this is..A favourite : ) Eileen Manassian March 14, 2015 at 8:55 AM Yes, Charmaine. I'm doing better. Thank you, sweetie. Life is short. We must enjoy every day. HUGS

Njeri Hunjeri March 14, 2015 at 2:59 AM Beautiful pics with beautiful words. Your words are a blessing. Keep them coming. Eileen Manassian March 14, 2015 at 8:56 AM Thank you, Njeri. I'm happy you stopped by. Hugs!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 14, 2015 at 2:27 AM A beautiful, peaceful place where God and love reside inside our souls...if only everyone could reach within to find comfort in that place when needed...I'm inspired to dig deeper and hold onto this gift...hugs, Rhonda Carolyn Devonshire March 15, 2015 at 4:40 AM Jade, your hymn is quite soothing. Thanks for sharing! Eileen Manassian March 14, 2015 at 2:29 AM Thanks, sweetie. Yes, there is such a place. Do you know that hymn..."There is a quiet place, far from the rapid pace, where God can soothe our troubled minds? Sheltered by tree and flower, there in my quiet hour with Him, my cares are laid, behind." I wonder if you know it. Thanks for your lovely post. Hugs