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There Is a Gentleman

There is a gentleman that I am acquainted with. He grins, but it is not seen in his eyes He chuckles, but it is only a lovely lie He speaks but conceals something inside He sings, but his quiet screams are audible He draws but has no one to console him He writes, yet it never alleviates his life's sorrow He adores, yet his thighs are scarred. He survives, but all he wants is death
He merely absorbs the ache, which is excruciatingly bitter And I take a step back from the mirror
3TH PLACE CONTEST WINNER Written: April 25, 2022 Near Death Experience Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Date: 5/9/2022 6:03:00 AM
This is extremely powerful and touching, especially when the reader comes to the end line. Blessings ~ paul
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Date: 5/8/2022 10:49:00 PM
Great and mysterious gentleman. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/8/2022 4:04:00 PM
Exquisite penning, Lasaad, laced depictions augment its underlying sincerity, with my compliments dear friend, Aloha~William
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Date: 5/8/2022 4:47:00 PM
Thank you so much, William, it really means a lot to me and is very appreciated. My deepest regards to you
Date: 5/8/2022 3:57:00 PM
Congrats on the win - sorry that it seems to have taken a lot of pain to produce. Take care, -jeff
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Date: 5/8/2022 4:49:00 PM
Thanks, Jeff. So much appreciate your congrats and your support.
Date: 5/7/2022 9:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "There is a gentleman" is a creative write. Have a great/blessed weekend.......................
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Date: 5/7/2022 8:56:00 AM
Stunning and masterfully penned; a sad story unfolds, a reflection of a life in ashes. Congratulations on your win in the contest! :)Paulette
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Date: 4/28/2022 6:38:00 PM
Ouch!... Even the mirror can lie sometimes. Hope so, anyway. Cheers, gw
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Date: 4/28/2022 10:21:00 AM
The last two lines are profound!! May you find peace. Best wishes!
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Date: 4/26/2022 2:30:00 PM
I understand your thoughts in your poem my friend. Death was welcomed by my suffering husband. May the rest of your days be filled with enough love to bless your life knowing you have a purpose here that is important. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 4/26/2022 5:20:00 AM
The turn in the two ending line tugs the heart. A very emotive write--true to life.
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Date: 4/26/2022 5:06:00 AM
Powerful deep writing, my friend, Lasaad! Be blessed!
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Date: 4/26/2022 1:21:00 AM
Quite a good write. Don't worry though. I feel I'm dying everyday.
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Date: 4/25/2022 8:32:00 PM
A good wrote, Lasaad!
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