Constance La France Poet Rhyme

There Is a Dream Place

There is a dream place where beauty and strength abide,
where ocean birds glide and fall from the clouds above;
and the great waves crash and roll-  and on rocks collide,
clouds, sky and water meet in this dream that I love.


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June 8, 2018


Poetry/Rhyme/There is a Dream Place
Copyright Protected, ID 18- 1029-409-01
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.



Written for the contest, When A Fourth Line Helps It To Rhyme
sponsor, Silent One


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Robert Lindley July 4, 2018 at 5:58 AM AWE INSPIRING POETRY MY FRIEND! So very much light cast and said in so very few words.. A fav.. a shining jewel..

Susan Gentry June 19, 2018 at 10:49 PM Congratulations on your win! A wonderful place. Well done!

Andrea Dietrich June 16, 2018 at 10:15 AM Wonderful, Constance. Congrats on your high placement. I hope you are feeling ok with your dear kitty gone.

Eve Roper June 14, 2018 at 8:11 PM Broken Wings, nicely done :) Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~’*

Andrea Dietrich June 14, 2018 at 7:22 PM So beautiful, constance, and I think you have this heritage, right? Native american. Congrats for top spot, dear.

Larry Bradfield June 13, 2018 at 2:05 PM Wonderful work! Congratulations on a well deserved top spot!..Larry

Paul Callus June 13, 2018 at 1:49 PM Beautiful imagery in an equally beautiful dream, Constance! Congratulations on placing first. Regards // paul

Edward Ibeh June 13, 2018 at 12:44 PM Heartiest congratulations for finishing at the very top, BW!:-) Very well deserved!

Joseph May June 13, 2018 at 10:22 AM Congrats on your win BW

Roy Pett June 13, 2018 at 10:06 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win BW, I want to go to this dream place after reading your beautifully written poem complimented by the wonderful video and music. :))

Mick Talbot June 13, 2018 at 9:51 AM Your words have depth, reality, not a dream, took me back to places, sights I've seen. I've ridden the waves, on leatherback turtles gazed. Watched flying fish fleeing for their lives. A school of dolphins many hundreds strong, the Mediterranean, Malta two and a half years my home. Surprising what four lines can do! Happy days on a sea so blue, memories evoked by you. Thanks B.W, congratulations on your 1st place. Mick

Natasha Turner June 13, 2018 at 7:41 AM So beautiful..well done dear..happy for you :) Just watched the youtube clip..thanks for sharing...mother Nature at it's best..so harmonious, powerful and relaxing :)

Fauxcroft Wade June 13, 2018 at 7:34 AM Congrats on deserved win for work work. Faux

Heidi Sands June 13, 2018 at 7:23 AM Congratulations for your top win BW! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen June 13, 2018 at 7:17 AM - Congratulations on your little rhyme poem, B.W. .... beautiful music :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Gondolf June 13, 2018 at 7:09 AM I love the peacefulness of this poem, Constance, congrats on your win. John

Silent One June 13, 2018 at 6:54 AM Sounds like a wonderful place and a fascinating dream BW.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..

Heidi Sands June 8, 2018 at 8:08 AM This poem is dreamy and had me feeling very peaceful. Well done BW!

Kim Rodrigues June 8, 2018 at 8:07 AM This is a beauty, Constance! A winner in my book! A fave! Constance La France June 9, 2018 at 8:16 AM Kim, thank you for visiting and for the compliment and fav, appreciate ~