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There Is a Dream Place

There is a dream place where beauty and strength abide, where ocean birds glide and fall from the clouds above; and the great waves crash and roll- and on rocks collide, clouds, sky and water meet in this dream that I love. ___________________________ June 8, 2018 Poetry/Rhyme/There is a Dream Place Copyright Protected, ID 18- 1029-409-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, When A Fourth Line Helps It To Rhyme sponsor, Silent One First Place

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Robert Lindley

Date: 7/4/2018 5:58:00 AM

AWE INSPIRING POETRY MY FRIEND! So very much light cast and said in so very few words.. A fav.. a shining jewel..

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/19/2018 10:49:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! A wonderful place. Well done!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/16/2018 10:15:00 AM

Wonderful, Constance. Congrats on your high placement. I hope you are feeling ok with your dear kitty gone.

Eve Roper

Date: 6/14/2018 8:11:00 PM

Broken Wings, nicely done :) Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~’*

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2018 7:22:00 PM

So beautiful, constance, and I think you have this heritage, right? Native american. Congrats for top spot, dear.

Larry Bradfield

Date: 6/13/2018 2:05:00 PM

Wonderful work! Congratulations on a well deserved top spot!..Larry

Paul Callus

Date: 6/13/2018 1:49:00 PM

Beautiful imagery in an equally beautiful dream, Constance! Congratulations on placing first. Regards // paul

Edward Ibeh

Date: 6/13/2018 12:44:00 PM

Heartiest congratulations for finishing at the very top, BW!:-) Very well deserved!

Joseph May

Date: 6/13/2018 10:22:00 AM

Congrats on your win BW

Roy Pett

Date: 6/13/2018 10:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win BW, I want to go to this dream place after reading your beautifully written poem complimented by the wonderful video and music. :))

Mick Talbot

Date: 6/13/2018 9:51:00 AM

Your words have depth, reality, not a dream, took me back to places, sights I've seen. I've ridden the waves, on leatherback turtles gazed. Watched flying fish fleeing for their lives. A school of dolphins many hundreds strong, the Mediterranean, Malta two and a half years my home. Surprising what four lines can do! Happy days on a sea so blue, memories evoked by you. Thanks B.W, congratulations on your 1st place. Mick

Natasha Turner

Date: 6/13/2018 7:41:00 AM

So beautiful..well done dear..happy for you :) Just watched the youtube clip..thanks for sharing...mother Nature at it's best..so harmonious, powerful and relaxing :)