Notes About The Poem

There Are Those Moments - For Contest

There are those moments…..

			spontaneous expressions
							of life
finding expression
		through the eyes
				…the voice
					    …the hands
							…the pen
	a focus
		…centering in the being

	a channel
			…unclogged

an echo
		….without reverberation

	a joy
		…centering in the being

focused
		….without aim

channeling
			….its truth

echoing
			…in chambered moment

the spontaneity
			…..of now.



John G. Lawless
11/4/2015

submitted to Oil Paintings 1-2-3
sponsor – Eve Roper

painting #3
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Spagnola Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 4:35 PM
Congratulations! it seems you may be describing a young John..:), jill
Lamoureux Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 8:20 AM
Clever poem and formatting, congrats.
Roper Avatar
November 17, 2015 at 9:58 PM
Thank you so very much for composing and submitting a poem in my contest, John, I love your write congratulations on your win!!! My husband and I truly enjoyed the poem. Hugs dear friend Eve
Lawless Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 7:19 AM
Thank you Eve for sharing your paintings with us and for the ingenious prompts they inspire.
A  Avatar
November 17, 2015 at 9:55 PM
John, Congratulations, Have a nice day. SKAT
Lawless Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 7:18 AM
thanks again....SKAT
Negron Flores Avatar
November 17, 2015 at 7:24 PM
Congratulations John
Lawless Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 7:18 AM
Thanks Nayda
Allison Avatar
November 17, 2015 at 6:33 PM
Love the structure of the poem John - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Lawless Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 7:18 AM
Thanks Jan, when I watch kids drawing, coloring, or scribbling I am always impressed by the intensity and focus of their endeavor
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