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Then They Become

Then they become ~ These lines are merely words written by a man who adores you Unless they bring a smile to your face, then they become… poetry ~

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Becca Teagan

Date: 12/8/2016 8:51:00 PM

I'm sure they will always bring a smile to her face ...

Chris Green
Date: 12/9/2016 8:04:00 AM

Thank you so much Rebecca.

Paloma P

Date: 12/8/2016 2:33:00 PM

It's amazing how so few words can penetrate the heart. :)

Chris Green
Date: 12/8/2016 2:45:00 PM

Thanks Paloma, that is such a nice thing to say

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/8/2016 2:19:00 PM

Hi Chris - Just perfect. And Yes, I can bet she smiled :)

Chris Green
Date: 12/8/2016 2:44:00 PM

Thank you Heidi for you nice comment

Darren White

Date: 12/8/2016 1:56:00 PM

This is poetry. I expect she smiled :)

Chris Green
Date: 12/8/2016 2:44:00 PM

Thanks so very much Darren

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/8/2016 1:44:00 PM

I'm sure your mission is accomplished...Am sure She is smiling.Very sweet.: )

Chris Green
Date: 12/8/2016 1:49:00 PM

Thank you Charmaine. I really enjoy when you visit my poetry and leave such nice thoughts for me.

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/8/2016 12:01:00 PM

WoW! Chris, I loved this short and straight to the point "love" poem. "These lines are just words ,unless they bring a smile on your face, then they become poetry." WoW! I enjoyed the read . A Big seven:-) Alexis

Chris Green
Date: 12/8/2016 1:38:00 PM

Thank you so very much my sweet friend. I appreciate all of the kindness you show me and the smiles you bring.