Then They Become

Then they become ~ These lines are merely words written by a man who adores you Unless they bring a smile to your face, then they become… poetry ~
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December 8, 2016 at 8:51 PM
I'm sure they will always bring a smile to her face ...
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December 9, 2016 at 8:04 AM
Thank you so much Rebecca.
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December 8, 2016 at 2:33 PM
It's amazing how so few words can penetrate the heart. :)
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December 8, 2016 at 2:45 PM
Thanks Paloma, that is such a nice thing to say
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December 8, 2016 at 2:19 PM
Hi Chris - Just perfect. And Yes, I can bet she smiled :)
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December 8, 2016 at 2:44 PM
Thank you Heidi for you nice comment
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December 8, 2016 at 1:56 PM
This is poetry. I expect she smiled :)
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December 8, 2016 at 2:44 PM
Thanks so very much Darren
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December 8, 2016 at 1:44 PM
I'm sure your mission is accomplished...Am sure She is smiling.Very sweet.: )
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December 8, 2016 at 1:49 PM
Thank you Charmaine. I really enjoy when you visit my poetry and leave such nice thoughts for me.
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December 8, 2016 at 12:01 PM
WoW! Chris, I loved this short and straight to the point "love" poem. "These lines are just words ,unless they bring a smile on your face, then they become poetry." WoW! I enjoyed the read . A Big seven:-) Alexis
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December 8, 2016 at 1:38 PM
Thank you so very much my sweet friend. I appreciate all of the kindness you show me and the smiles you bring.
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