Then Now

Then... In your eyes my love once showed In your smile my heart did grow In your touch my passion flowed Now... In your words my heart breaks In your arms I have no place In your life there's no space Lay
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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April 28, 2016 at 4:43 PM
Hi LAY, stopping by to say, haven't seen you around in years. A sad place to be even in the now at times... enjoyed. LINDA
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August 14, 2012 at 9:51 AM
gut-wrenching in all it's beauty,lay... love the emotional appeal of this write, so straight from the heart.. superb, oh wow!..:) huggs!
Kendrick Avatar
August 14, 2012 at 9:49 AM
Sad but well expressive poem of love lost...Sara
Andresen Avatar
August 14, 2012 at 9:38 AM
:( Sad . . . but, like the poem. - Hope your heart will be happy again......soon. - oxox love // Anne-Lise :)
Palmer Avatar
August 14, 2012 at 9:23 AM
the weakening of love,pump it up and see if you can get back then,lol great write Walayee
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