Then Now

Then... In your eyes my love once showed In your smile my heart did grow In your touch my passion flowed Now... In your words my heart breaks In your arms I have no place In your life there's no space Lay

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/28/2016 4:43:00 PM

Hi LAY, stopping by to say, haven't seen you around in years. A sad place to be even in the now at times... enjoyed. LINDA

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/14/2012 9:51:00 AM

gut-wrenching in all it's beauty,lay... love the emotional appeal of this write, so straight from the heart.. superb, oh wow!..:) huggs!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/14/2012 9:49:00 AM

Sad but well expressive poem of love lost...Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/14/2012 9:38:00 AM

:( Sad . . . but, like the poem. - Hope your heart will be happy again......soon. - oxox love // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Palmer

Date: 8/14/2012 9:23:00 AM

the weakening of love,pump it up and see if you can get back then,lol great write Walayee