Glenn Sentes Poet Verse

Then Hue Lure My Being

Fill my craving with your zesty rind
In the mist of my longing, come splashing
Ingest my inn with your piquant smiles

Will you rain like dew for my pipe is parched?
Drizzle my windows with decorative light and
Melt your pot in that multihued bend

Be my condiment in this insipid snack
But preserve your liquiscent state
No! Not in the canister

Who says this dye belongs to Freud?
After you entice my eyes and tongue.
Then citrus filled my air now back to stanza one.

Orange
For Nette Onclaud’s Color My Word
Adjudged 3rd Place
Glenn L. Sentes

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Kyle Kriticos September 25, 2011 at 1:00 AM I read this for the second time and still enjoyed it, even without completing understanding it. Please Glenn, tell me what this means lol round 2 of reading it and I like it enough that I want to know! Glenn Sentes November 12, 2011 at 1:12 AM Oh thanks Kyle Kriticos! I would love to tell you what this all means. Go to chatroom! haha!

Arnold Mutugi July 20, 2011 at 1:27 PM Glenn; oranges can be so damn beautiful.The big ones in here taste like pineapples; no kidding! Nice one

Nette Onclaud July 18, 2011 at 11:24 PM any new one glen?? come and visit me, hopefully with a comment; would love to hear from you! :) huggs

Glenn Sentes July 15, 2011 at 1:15 AM Thank you sooo much for your heartwarming congrats and compliments! God bless us all!

Glenn Sentes July 15, 2011 at 1:12 AM Thank you sooo much for your heartwarming congrats and compliments! God bless us all!

Andrea Dietrich July 14, 2011 at 7:47 PM A very clever one for orange! congrats on your great win!

Kyle Kriticos July 14, 2011 at 6:46 PM Very intricate, with an impressive vocabulary. It made me smile tonight!

Debbie Guzzi July 14, 2011 at 1:47 PM hmmm I wouldn't have got this without some thought! which is just how i like my poetry ;) Congrad's Light & love

Charlotte Puddifoot July 14, 2011 at 9:25 AM congrats on your win in the contest with this sparky little number! I'm almost picking up on a double meaning in this...whatever, it's very well written and has me smiling :-)

Dr.Ram Mehta July 14, 2011 at 7:25 AM My congratulations on this win in the contest of nette, Glenn

Michael J. Falotico July 14, 2011 at 5:52 AM Well done Glen....Congrats

Carol Sunshine Brown July 14, 2011 at 5:42 AM Congratulations for your win Glenn in Nette's "Color My World" Contest. Love, Carol

Elaine George July 13, 2011 at 9:35 PM Beautiful, Glenn, Many congrats on your super win. Lainie

Judy Ball July 13, 2011 at 8:08 PM Congrats on your win my friend. A fine write. God Bless, JB

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 13, 2011 at 6:41 PM thankxx Glenn for your most sweet and kindly words of comment.. I am very deeply touched and happy to know have been an inspiration to u luv.. we are led to certain poets for special reasons.. am happy u enjoy my work as I do yours my friend ..blessings with luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 13, 2011 at 3:34 PM Congrats Glenn on your terrific third place win with this great write on orange in color my world contest luv..

Jancarl Campi July 12, 2011 at 3:27 PM an interesting poem. thanks for sharing, Jancarl C. Thanks for reading my work

James Foulk July 11, 2011 at 12:10 PM very well written and so creative, good luck in contest.

Nette Onclaud July 10, 2011 at 9:52 PM thank you for joing, glen.. i'll savor this some more come judging time... ang ganga naman! come visit! :) huggs, nette

Doris Culverhouse July 10, 2011 at 1:20 PM sounds like a loove afair....I like it! Doris Culverhouse July 13, 2011 at 5:08 PM congrats on the win!!