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Then Came War

I saw her standing in the mist Oh, this was long before we kissed She was a child and so was I But that changed slowly, bye and bye The courtship seemed to last for years We laughed and cried and dried our tears We wed one June before the war The time was short, the distance far And then war came and I was gone We knew our love would carry on And so it did, but here I lie All shot to hell as here I die Don't bury me in blood soaked land Take me to Texas' wind blown sand She was my life - my life was good Just carve those words on mesquite wood 4-27-20 Contest: Couplet- Any Length, Any Theme Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Date: 5/5/2020 11:25:00 PM
Best wishes and congrats for your win in Dear Heart's contest, Larry - I hope you and yours are staying safe and sound. Blessings and keep up the great writing, My Friend! :o)
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 5/6/2020 10:21:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Gregory. I appreciate the words
Date: 5/5/2020 7:17:00 PM
Larry, emotional and beautifully penned, congratulations on your win in my contest _Constance
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 5/6/2020 10:22:00 PM
Enjoyed the contest as usual! Thank you for the placement!
Date: 5/4/2020 11:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement win in Dear Heart’s contest. Hugs Eve
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 5/6/2020 10:22:00 PM
Thank you Eve!

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